新G准备中，第一次发作文，请勿手下留情

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TOPIC: ARGUMENT7 - The following appearedin a letter to the editor of the Clearview newspaper.

"In the next mayoral election,residents of Clearview should vote for Ann Green, who is a member of the GoodEarth Coalition, rather than for Frank Braun, a member of the Clearview towncouncil, because the current members are not protecting our environment. Forexample, during the past year the number of factories in Clearview has doubled,air pollution levels have increased, and the local hospital has treated 25percent more patients with respiratory illnesses. If we elect Ann Green, theenvironmental problems in Clearview will certainly be solved."
WORDS: 296
TIME: 00:30:00
DATE: 2011/10/27 11:42:05

In the argument, the author made aconclusion that people in Clearview should vote for Ann Green, a member of GoodEarth Coalition, instead voting for Frank Braun who worked for Clearview towncouncil for the reason that Frank was not protecting the environment ofClearview. But several flaws have occurred in the argument which weak theconvincing of this passage.

To begin with, the author mentioned thatthe air pollution level have increased because the number of factories inClearview has doubled, which means that author believed that it was thefactories made the air worse. But there's no specific data to indicate thepollution caused by the factories was affecting the air pollution level. Theraised air pollution level may cause by the increasing number of automobiles ordecreasing number of green plants. In addition, though the local hospital hastreated 25 percent more patients with respiratory illnesses, there's still nodirect evidence to prove these patients' illnesses were caused by the pollutionof factories.

Moreover, the author's claim that if thepeople elect Ann Green, the environment problems in Clearview will be certainlysolved fell into another fallacy. Maybe the author's idea came from anenvironment protection plan made by Ann Green, the experience of Ann Green inenvironment protection or other related information, however, none of thosementioned above was given in the passage, which made the conclusion was simplybased on an assumption.

Besides, the author failed to discuss whatthe priority mission of the mayoral of Clearview is. Throughout the passage,the author thought that protecting the environment was the most necessary ofClearview, but again, the author didn't provide detail information to supporthis idea. Maybe the economy in Clearview was poor and should be considered todevelop first.

谢谢各位~~！！

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另外，请问I和A的字数要多少比较好？去年考旧G时，A谢了不到400，I因为有45分钟所以谢了450左右，但新G的I和A一样都只有30分钟了，不知道今年新G要写多少合适？？

沙发自己占~~~~

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lz 确定这题是新题库里的？

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3# 水蜜桃tb 老题库里的，不过不影响训练