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发表于 2011-11-28 19:21:26 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览
11.26+independent: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The advices from our grandparents have no use for their grandchildren because the world changed a lot during the past 50 years.

Some people deem it is a general truth that the advices of adult who are living in today are useful for children. However, as far as I am concerned, if their experiences have some good effect, it is far from being the best one.

There is no denying the face that not all advices from grandparents have any use for children, because our grandparents living in the world more than 60 or 70 years. Actually, we have to admit that after all most situation, we can get good advices for living, study, even career from our grandparents. Especially when young people as fresh graduate meet difficultly in social. We always would like finding the people who are old and we can know them to get some answer. I believe some people also same me to finding our grandparents. I insist on staying here because my grandparents can bring me spiritual satisfaction.

No matter whether you agree or not that advice from old people are more fair and objective than adult. Even, they are not your grandparents, and have any blood relation with you. You know, adult always make a showy display of their abilities and shortness more time. The adult can give children some advice but always adding their personal opinion. Even, adding some criticism will make children feeling lake of confidence. But old people don’t do that. They always have gentle state of mind with objective views. Their answer often let children feeling happy.

Therefore, if getting advice from grandparents or old people are not the best way to help children. What is the best method? To ask successors people how to become a business man? He must tell you his next meeting waiting for him. If you are lucky, he maybe can tell you that you need read some books which are very important for his process and leave you. He does that just for his public images. He never know you, how to suggest your life? As children or like me who are young people had better looking for a honest advice.

Taking all the factors mentioned above into account. We can safely arrive at the fact that advices from old people (of course, including our grandparents) are very useful for children or young people, even for adult. We should give best regards for them.
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发表于 2011-11-28 23:43:47 |只看该作者
作文修改好了,个人建议,如有不合适的,还请谅解!谢谢啊

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发表于 2011-11-29 01:08:20 |只看该作者
Hi,你这个冷酷的guy,非常感谢你的手下留情。我会好好写好好写。坚持到底!谢谢!!!

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