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It is deniable that the main responsibility of a government is to keep its citizens both mentally and physically healthy,therefore,the art museums and music performance as well as the recreational facilities are all essential.However, whether one is of more importance and need more support than the other should the issue that needed to be considered firstly.From my perspective,I strongly suggest that the government should pour more support on the art museums and music performance.

To begin with,the art museums and music performance allow us a more convenient and accessible way to learn about different cultures.Nowadays,numerous people are likely to have a tourist during vacations.One of the common reason is that they can experience different culture,various lifestyle to broaden their horizons.If someone is too busy and barely have time to visit other places,however,dose it mean he has no access to such an experience?The answer is absolutely no for the sake of art museumes and music performance.When you enter a art museum or a music theater,you can have a all aroud view of the foreign culture for example the Italian music opera or the masterpiece of darvenki.That is real cool,isn't it?

Moreover,the art museum and the music performance can help us learn about the history.There is always an old saying that history repeats itself,therefore,if we know greatly  about the history,we will more easily to avoid the same mistakes or disasters that happened in the past.For instance,when I was in my high school,my parents took me to the theater to watch a music performance concerning the World War II.It really teachs me a lesson that  if a contry doesn't try his best to increase his comprehensive national power,what is waiting for it is the destruction.Since then,I make a decison I must be diligent to make my contry more powerful.

Someone may argues that the recreational facilities can provide a good places to relax ourselves.Admittedly,it does have this kind of function,however,it seems to be minor compared to the music performance and art museum.Think that after a whole day's hard work and you are very tired ,which one will  you prefer , the swimming pool of many persons or the quiet theater with a wonderful music.I believe you have got  the answer.

To conclude,it hasn't gone far to say the government should pour more support to the art museum and music performance than the recreation facilities by the three points that are mentioned above