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According to the passage and listening, we know they different from each other. The passage thought 4 days working is good. The professor hold that 4 days is not good when it compared with the 5 days.

First, the writer revealed that worker who work 4 days have enough time to rest and may have fewer error, according to thelistening materical, while the 4 days might force spend more or a lot more. They may have less money and benefits, and must hire additional employee, which require more space and comuter and cut the company's profit.

Second, the reading passage states that using 4 days have addtional payroll and raise the cost. But the letucer indicates that it doesn't follow the 4 days and it may have the new cost. People can take the 4 days workers to do the 5 days work, which raise expection.

Third, 4 days workers can use their rest time to have a rest. But the professor think 4 days employee may lose the position when they compare with 5days, because the manager want the 5 days workers to supervise the entire works.
The lecture refute the passage in those three aspects.

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According to the passage and listening, we know them different from each other. The passage thought（thinks 吧……论文好像很少用过去时的说） 4 days working is good. The professor hold those（regards that the） 4 days is not good when it compared with the 5 days.


First, the writer revealed (用一般进行时撒？)that worker(是不是得用 the worker 或者 workers) who work 4 days have（not?） enough time to rest and may have fewer errors,(有点混乱啊，如果是 writer 根据listening 会不会太诡异？或者拆成两句如何) according to the listening material, while the 4 days workers might be forced to spend more or a lot more. They （改成the company 如何）may have less money and benefits, and must hire additional employees, which(who?) requires more space and computers and cut the company's profit.

Second, the reading passage states that using 4 days have(has?) additional payroll and raise the cost. But the lecturer indicates that it doesn't follow the 4 days and it may have the new cost（汗，没看懂…杯具）. People can take（make?） the 4 days workers to do the 5 days work, which raise expection. (啥？)

Third, 4 days workers can use their rest time to have rest. But the professor thinks the 4 days employee may lose the position when they are compared with the 5days, because the manager wants the 5 days workers to supervise the entire works (to do all the work).


The lecture refutes the passage in those three aspects.

在下水平不高，能力有限，加上这篇没做过，所以只略改了改语法拼写部分，实在抱歉，望共勉。