这是尼古拉斯的作文贴啊！！ daily writing！！

nicholaseUID：2859724

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nicholaseUID：2859724

We cannot deny that our society is suffering from many serious problems ,such as environmental pollution,lack of resources and wars between countries.And it is obvious that these problem has been lasting for a very long period of time.Some people believe these problem can be solved within our lifetime.From my point of view,these problem may continue deterioring in the future,not mention that they could be solved.
  One major problem we are confronted with is environmental pollution.With the fast development  of our society,we are sacrificing our environment for our own sakes in many ways.As known to all ,industry is a very important component of our socitey.While producing what we need,they also create nurmous by-products,and they have to discharge them into rivers,farmlands and so on,which will certainly have a negative influence on our environment.For example,when some chemical substances are discharged into the rivers,fish dies and the water in it can never be drunk again.As long as we human being exist,the environmental pollution will continue.
  In addition,another problem we are facing is the lack of resources,and they are still being depleting by human being.Many kinds of resources,such as oil and coal mine, cannot be renewed again,and it is very difficult and costly to develop another kind of resouce to replace what we are using now.
  What's more,war is a common phenomenon throughout the history.Because of material resources and religions,some countries have to start wars to attrack other countries for their own sakes.Numerous people die because of wars.As a result,a great many people are suffering from wars,they lose their family members and lovers ,which could be really painful.As known to all,throughout the human history,war never stops and it will definetely continue in the future!
  In conclusion,some important problems affecting our society cannot be solved within our lifetime.Our environment are being polluting,our resource are become less and les ,and war will never stop!

lovely_hippo123UID：3209964

We cannot deny that our society is suffering from many serious problems ,such as environmental pollution,lack of resources and wars between countries.And it is obvious that these problem has been lasting for a very long period of time.Some people believe these problem can be solved within our lifetime.From my point of view,these problem may continue deterioring in the future,not mention that they could be solved.6 ?  f/ x& W! [
  
One major problem we are confronted with is environmental pollution.With the fast development  of our society,we are sacrificing our environment for our own sakes in many ways.As known to all ,industry is a very important component of our socitey.While producing what we need,they also create nurmous by-products,and they have to discharge them into rivers,farmlands and so on,which will certainly have a negative influence on our environment.For example,when some chemical substances are discharged into the rivers,fish dies and the water in it can never be drunk again.As long as we human being exist,the environmental pollution will continue.-这句话好哇。。我写的时候这个意思就是表达不出来。。。

In addition,another problem we are facing is the lack of resources,and they are still being depleting-depleted by human being.Many kinds of resources,such as oil and coal mine, cannot be renewed again,and it is very difficult and costly to develop another kinds of resouces to replace what we are using now.

What's more,war is a common phenomenon throughout the history.Because of material resources and religions,some countries have to start wars to attrack other countries for their own sakes-基于用过了 所以用development好不好.Numerous people die because of wars.As a result,a great many people are suffering from wars,they lose their family members and lovers ,which could be really painful.As known to all-为了保证句式多样化，所以换一个？obviously？,throughout the human history,war never stops and it will definetely continue in the future!

In conclusion,some important problems affecting our society cannot be solved within our lifetime.Our environment are being polluting-这里用被动式 polluted,our resources are become less and less ,and war will never stop!
紫色--excellent
红色--纠错
改这篇，表示压力很大，
觉得 思路清晰， 行文流畅，
单复数上注意一下，
写的狠好哇。。。
我有相同的两个观点，花我了两小时，狠不好。
唉。。。能力有限。。
一起加油啊。。。

wqr619UID：3007621

We cannot deny that our society is suffering from many serious problems ,such as environmental pollution,lack of resources and wars between countries.And it is obvious that these problem(problems) has been lasting for a very long period of time.Some people believe these problem can be solved within our lifetime.From my point of view,these problem may continue deterioring(deteriorate,好词) in the future,not mention that they could be solved.: x; m" I( V. X8 h. `4 b- D( \. d
  One major problem we are confronted with is environmental pollution.With the fast development  of our society,we are sacrificing our environment for our own sakes in many ways.As known to all ,industry is a very important component of our socitey.While producing what we need,they also create nurmous(?) by-products,and they have to discharge(学到了) them into rivers,farmlands and so on,which will certainly have a negative influence on our environment.For example,when some chemical substances are discharged into the rivers,fish dies and the water in it can never be drunk again.As long as we human being exist,the environmental pollution will continue.* f  U  j: b3 F2 ^' c% F. {, F
  In addition,another problem we are facing is the lack of resources,and they are still being depleting by（建议改成due to） human being.Many kinds of resources,such as oil and coal mine, cannot be renewed again,and it is very difficult and costly to develop another kind of resouce to replace what we are using now." q. }) V4 x3 E( Q+ G4 O; Q0 y% S
  What's more,war is a common phenomenon throughout the history.Because of material resources and religions,some countries have to start wars to attrack other countries for their own sakes.Numerous people die because of wars.As a result,a great many people are suffering from wars,they lose their family members and lovers ,which could be really painful.As known to all,throughout the human history,war never stops and it will definetely continue in the future!
In conclusion,some important problems affecting our society cannot be solved within our lifetime.Our environment are being polluting,our resource are become less and les ,and war will never stop!

楼主的结尾不错啊。文章很牛呐，结构也很清晰，用词也很准确啊。如此神作牛人，居然还来顶我的贴，真不敢当。
一起加油哈哈~
以后的作文求狂拍，不要只是顶了，不然我只想找块豆腐撞了~~