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2月3日 110815NA One of your classmates needs help with some schoolwork. Which solution would you recommend your classmate should do: to ask you for hlpe or to find a professinal tutor for help. Include reasons and details to in your response.7

  As we all know that we should be enthusiastic enough to our classmates, thus we should do our best to help them when they meet any trouble. We know everyone in our class well because we are all students, we do the same homework, we learn from the same teacher, we study together, etc. So, in my point of view, it is better for you to ask me for help when you need help with some schoolwork
    First of all, I think it can make you more independent to ask me for help. We are all students, so we have to discuss the problems before we get the right answer. For example, my classmates Tom asked me a math question which I had not read it before last year. I did not say no to him immediately, on the contrary, I spent two hours with him on this question and finally we got the right answer. We felt proud of ourselves. During two hours time, we kept thinking how to try all the methods we know to solve this question in stead of asking a professional tutor for help straightly. So I think it is more worthy to ask me or other classmates for help with your schoolwork.

Then, I think it can help you to improve the relationship between you and your classmates. After discussing the questions which you don’t know with your classmates, you can talk about everything you want with them, such like movie, shopping, singer, etc. A person only know how to study, his life is not complete. So if you just ask your tutor for help very time you meet trouble, you will lose a lot of opportunities to communicate with you classmates, you will lose a lot of friends and happiness. I think it is a huge pity, we need friends and we need a good relationship between us and our friends.
    I know someone may say that a professional tutor can help us solve all the questions we don’t know in a minute, we can leave tutor a good impression, we can save much time to study, etc. I concede all of these advantages, but after a day’s working, he also needs to relax himself for a while, we shouldn’t ask the questions which we can handle to our tutor. So I still think it is better to ask me or other students for help when you meet trouble in schoolwork.

Everyone is different, so everyone has his or her own way to study, you can choose to ask your tutor for help and you can also ask me or your classmates for help, it is up to you. But personally speaking I prefer you to ask me for help when you need help with any schoolwork.

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