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随意写了完全不会啊写个中立混过关吧

Research VS. Educating

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Most of professors tend to do research than educating. It is obvious, that they are eager to improve themselves. Yet they are not conflict with each other.  In my view, professors are supposed to make same effort in each of things.

First, doing research benefits both students and professors. For professors of medicine, university gives them access to do research so they can save people. For professors of anthropology, collage offers them an opportunity to reach the history. For professors of astronomy, college allows them to study how our university is. On the other hand, students get updated information from instructor since instructor keeps recharging themselves for studies. At the mean time, professor's achievements will motivate students. They would do something to catch up once they realize how outstanding their instructors are.

Second, teachers should not leave their students behind completely but only dedicating in researching. They shoulder the responsibility to impart knowledge. Students need professor's assistance. For instance, my professor, Steven, in colledge always takes us to do experiments for a better understanding of certain complex term. Thanks to him, we are exciting about his class and listen to what he recently do in researching. We all get the sense that we are together to learn. Therefore, educating should not be placed in the second place.

In the end, I would say that neither educating nor researching should be neglected since they, to some extent, influence each other.

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The reading passage states that one work was not painted by Rembrandt due to three reasons. In the listening material, however, the woman casts doubt on each of them.

First, speaking about the woman's dress in the portrait, the fur color wasn't the part of the painting. It was added after the painting was made since someone might want to increase the value of the work.

Second, the reading contends that there are some confliction of light and shadow. However, once the fur color was removed, the woman was wearing a simple cloth, and the light illuminated her face. That is exactly what we expect from Rembrandt.

At last, considering about the panel made of several pieces of wood glued together, the original paint which removes the fur color, is in the same piece of wood just like what we expect. Additionally, the wood is the same with certain paint by Rembrandt.

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0 R' r. G8 O$ q; c. z5 \5 WMost of professors tend to do research than educating(前后词性还是对称点好改为education). It is obvious, that they are eager to improve themselves. Yet they are not conflict with each other. In my view, professors are supposed to make same effort in each of things.
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: @& _: q8 ~' f0 Y5 \" @. b/ T( WFirst, doing research benefits both students and professors. For instance professors of medicine, the university gives them access to do research so they can save people.（举例太不详细了。可以再写细点，怎么救人的什么之类的） For professors of anthropology, collage offers them an opportunity to reach the history. For professors of astronomy, college allows them to study how our university is. On the other hand, students get updated information from instructor since instructor keeps recharging themselves（them） for studies. At the mean time, professor's achievements will motivate students. They would do something to catch up once they realize how outstanding their instructors are. 1 Y Z- W4 n& [: \5 [$ ?4 }) k: N

% ^+ b) J- t0 n' g; O$ @# E" lSecond, teachers should not leave their students behind completely but only dedicating in researching.(没有读懂。。- -。) They shoulder the responsibility to impart knowledge to students, who need their assistance. For instance, my professor, Steven, in colledge always takes us to do experiments for a better understanding of certain complex term. Thanks to him, we are exciting (excited by) his class and (when listening 此处用and感觉不妥) to what he recently do in researching. We all get the sense that we are together to learn. Therefore, educating should not be placed in the second place. 7 Q. O6 J1 A9 D2 _

2 f, E/ Z+ i ?2 YIn the end, I would say that neither educating nor researching should be neglected since they, to some extent, influence each other.


举例就尽量写详细点吧。

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2.13

好吧没被分到独立- - 不是我偷懒~~~ oye~~


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The lecturer claims that dinosaurs were endotherms. This does not agree with the reading passage which holds an opposite view.

According to the reading passage, dinosaurs survive in Polar Regions which only endotherms can activate. The lecture, by contrast, suggests that the polar region in the past is much warmer than today. So, not only endotherms can survive. In addition, when temperature goes down, animals like dinosaurs can migrate to warmer places.

The second point concerns leg position and movement. The lecturer asserts that the leg is used for supporting weighing. That's why dinosaurs grow to a large size.

Finally, the lecturer argues that there are evidences on dinosaur’s body to prove that dinosaur stop growing in cooling environment. And that is not the characteristic for endotherms. However, the reading passage contends that the fossilized bones of dinosaus are dense with Haversian canals which was a characteristic of endotherms

经常被我弄地同段里面好像听力阅读讲的不是同件事一样- -、

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限时一定要限 例子一定要塞（detail老重要了） 字数一定要足 每天找个文章仿写下结构和句子
还是这个水平到考试就死翘翘吧死翘翘吧死翘翘吧

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The lecturer claims that dinosaurs were （were not） endotherms. This does not agree with the reading passage which holds an opposite view.

According to the reading passage, dinosaurs survive in Polar Regions which only endotherms can activate. The lecture, by contrast, suggests that the polar region in the past is much warmer than today. So, not only endotherms can survive(咦？我咋听到的是恒温君才不在那个暖暖的极地过呢？). In addition, when temperature goes down（这个得用过去时喵？）, animals like dinosaurs can migrate to warmer places. 3 |! y0 j2 A& V
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The second point concerns leg position and movement. The lecturer asserts that the leg is used for supporting weighing. That's why dinosaurs grow to a large size.（汗，太简略了………补充下…人家貌似说阅读君提到的腿长下面是支持running的这个很恒温状。。。）

Finally, the lecturer argues that there are evidences on dinosaur’s body to prove that dinosaur stop growing in cooling environment. And that is not the characteristic for endotherms. However, the reading passage contends that the fossilized bones of dinosaus（dinosaurs） are dense with Haversian canals which was a characteristic of endotherms
（汗啊。。。阅读君貌似是说恐龙君虽然某骨头结构长得很恒温，那个是决定什么生长的，但是听力君说人家决定生长的是另一堆骨头啦，那堆简直是爬行必备啊。。。）

额。。因为我听力也不好。。。所以姑娘你要不找个文本来看看？毕竟人家说得听力者得天下是很有道理滴。。。

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2.14

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The lecturer and the reading passage hold completely different views toward how "great houses" were used, which is the settlements of Chaco Canyon in New Mexico in the American Southwest.

First, the lecturer states that it looks like a living place from outside. Yet from inside the house, it cast serious doubt on many people lived there. There are supposed to have lots of fire places for daily cooking. Yet in one of the largest rooms, there are only fireplaces for 10 families, while there are enough rooms for more than 100 families.  In contrast, the reading passage states that it is purely residential. (这边我没懂，其中一个最大的房间只有可供10个家庭可以煮的炉子。 后面一句又说尽管有更多的房间。- -这边到底是侧重炉子还是侧重房间啊。)

Second, the lecturer argues that there are no traces of maze, or the container of maize. The reading, however, mentions that the house is used for store food supplies like maize.

Finally with regard to ceremonial center, the lecturer argues against it since there are other building materials that would be expected from ceremony such as sand, stone, and other construction material. In addition, the mound could be regular trash, when it is used up and thrown away.

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The most important problems affecting our society today could be solved within our lifetime.

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"We can never resolve even one of the biggest problems in the world when we are alive." They say. I do not doubt that. People are kind of selfish and they are unwilling to make themselves uncomfortable for helping to solve the world problem. Therefore, I can not agree more with the point that the most important problems affecting our society today could be solved within our lifetime.

War is one of the world issues. People keep fighting for everything, such as fossil fuel, power. The Second World War is supposed to be the war ending of every war in the future since it caused great disaster to people.  Many suggest that about 60 million people died in the war, including 20 million soldiers and 40 million civilians. According to statistic, however, there are only 26 days people do not fight after the Second World War. From it, I realize that people can no tolerate a day without fighting. They want to be stronger, own something, yet they choose the most dangerous way.

Environment, another earth problem, is far more than we could fix within 100 years. We human beings do not create it in one night. The truth is, what we do hundreds of years give rise to it. Until the day, earth can not bear any more and return it back to us. Say, global warming. We all know that if we reduce the chance of using electric equipment, the carbon dioxide will be cut more or less. However, people are unwilling to give up using cars when go outside, or using air-condition in hot weather. It is only when the end of the world come to us, we can suddenly realize our awkward circumstance. Yet that is too late.

We can not ignore the climate change as well. Many are unaware of the whole results and influence of it. They contended that a little hotter or cooler every year do not make many troubles to them. Yet they did not take the ice melt into account. After the glaciers melt, the sea level will rise as well which will probably uproots millions of people, and with wider consequences. Tuvalu has been the first country moving to other places in 2008. Yet it will not be the last one. We now are incapable of stopping the rising of sea level since facing the nature, we are too small.

In a nutshell, I still insist to my point that people can not resolve the most important problems influencing our society nowadays considered to the short lifespan.

要弥补：字数+尽详细的例子论证！！！

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2.15

100213NA People who cannot accept criticism will not succeed in a team.

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“I can not take his cruel criticism.”People always say that. But they do not realize that criticisms are often motivated by good intentions, especially in a team. I would, therefore, say that people can not reach success in a team when they fail to accept criticism.

First of all, people hardly realize their disadvantage if others do not remind them. More than once I told my basketball team my decision of how to perform. At first they listened to me. Yet we failed again and again. Then some started to doubt my decision and provided useful advices. I considered it deeply and had a heat discussion with them. At last we used a new plan and we won in a game. See? Although it is right to persist our opinion, why not let it go and choose a better one if it is wrong or not good enough? In a team, what members suggest will probably benefit the team since they are the part of it.

Also, if people do not be humble to take advice, it will affect the relationship in a team. Only when members agree with you, the overall efficiency of the group will be increased. Just like the example I mentioned before. The team wasted lots of time in my poor decision and they did not believe me when I tried to let them follow my second decision. Thanks to a discussion, the progress moved on. Yet if we have a discussion at first, we will finish the game as quick as possible and have no need to worry about our poor performance; especially I left a bad impression on other members then. And I had no voice to speak any more. Therefore, for reaching the success in a group, people can not ignore other's feelings and words.

Without doubt, criticism makes people feel upset. Statistics, however, shows that when pressures like criticism come to a person, one can perform better since one realizes that it is about the whole group. In this case, the responsibility largely urges one to tap potential which is good for personal development and the achievements of a group.

To summarize, people who accept criticism have a better chance to succeed in a team due to the merits it brings about, such as useful advices, relationships, and personal developments.

现在开始不写到500字以上不交。！ 这样子上了考场就算有时间也只能发呆不知道写什么了！
改正比不断的练习更加重要！练习只是不断重复错误的思路！改正却可以加以改正和磨练出更好的文章！！！一定要自己先完善下！！！

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先占着。。。睡去。。。起床写。。。

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