【Daily Writing作文特训小组】stancy的作业帖

stancy_zhangUID：3235143

明天没有时间发，所以这么早就发了。。。

nadine1009UID：3249051

hi~改完啦~请有空也帮我改改啊~
2.13stancy.doc        http://vdisk.weibo.com/s/2w7O8
级别不够不能传附件  传微盘了哈~

sodapengUID：3242849

困死了。。我明儿起来一定给你改哇。。。hiahia

sodapengUID：3242849

已改~

stancy_zhangUID：3235143

有点晚。。。。

stancy_zhangUID：3235143

第一次用写字板写。。。拼写错误超多，崩溃。。。

stancy_zhangUID：3235143

2月16号的。。。。昨天的貌似木有人改。。。桑心

sodapengUID：3242849

哎呀哎呀。终于改完啦~~~不好意思 这么晚才给你~

idealibtUID：2667256

抱歉改完了 2/15的

pls check

最近事情有点多 2/15的我就不写了啊
附件意见供参考

stancy_zhangUID：3235143

综合写作刚写呐，各位狠狠的批哈！！

stancy_zhangUID：3235143

2月17号 独立写作

yxy319UID：3014935

2.17 综合

stancy_zhangUID：3235143

2月18日 综合写作~

sillydsUID：2985444

26# stancy_zhang

The improvement of science and technologyhas to some extent enhanced the ability of people to solve some importantproblems. It seems that the government is not so important any more. However,is people really do not need support(do people not need any support) from the government? Personally speaking,I hold the view that people still need help from the government. First we cometo discuss what bring us the ability to solve many important problems.


Nowadays, almost over 70% of the(删除) familieshave their own cars. In weekends people can drive their own cars to go shoppingor have a trip. They do not force(aren't forced) to take buses, which is supplied(provided) bygovernment. It seems that people have solved a big problem of going out bycars(It seems that cars helps people to solve the problems of traveling). However, have you ever thought it before, where are the cars come from? Acompletely car come from a factory, need numerous engineers and scientists whoare employee by the factory and government. Accordingly, even though we claimthat we solve this problems by ourselves, there is also exist(there also exists) the potentialhelper that is government.


Furthermore, we can deal with some problemsbut not any problems. So, it is of necessity for us to turn to help from ourgovernment(turn to government for help). Many nature disasters we can not solve them ourselves, such asflood, temblor and volcanoes eruption. In 2008, there was a big earthquakehappened in Sichuan, China. Just one night, a large number of people died.Children lost their parents, wife lost their husband and people lost theirfriends. It was government who saved a lot of people buried in ruins, who builthouses for homeless, who transport amount of food to people who starved(who provided the starved people lots of food and daily necessities). It isof great importance for the help of our government.


From all I have discussed above, we candraw the conclusion that people need help from government even though sometimesthey can solve the problems themselves.


文章总体一般，没有明确表明分论点，论证没有展，
有些句子有问题，纯属个人意见

2.18  独立  https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1332678-2-1.html

stancy_zhangUID：3235143

2月18日 独立