【Daily Writing作文特训小组】stancy的作业帖

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2月20 日 综合

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33# by900125 亲，是这样的呐。我写第一段的意思是，总的概括下，听力和阅读中讲的一些问题。 ，二三四段式分别阐述。还有的话，我觉得综合写作可能更侧重听力，所以我可能在听力上更加着笔多一点

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34# stancy_zhang

哦，那可能是我弄错了

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2月21 综合抱歉有点晚

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The lecturer talks about the benefit about the function of selling and buying fossils. She says even though fossil commerce have to some extent bad influence for study. However, the pros are outweighing the cons. There are three reasons to prove it.第一段最好写一下reading passage 的观点

First, the passage says fossils can not be seen by public. Because they are hidehidden by private collectors. However, it is not totally true. The more explosionexposure will the fossils are for commercial trading.

Second, there is no doubt that scientists will be needed more heavily than before. Private collectors are not experts for fossils, so they need scientists or experts to identify the value of them. That is, scientist also discoveries the important fossils first. On the other part, to collect fossils need amount of money. She can not believe the museums and universities have this ability. However, millionaire fossils buyers have.又听了一遍，还是木有听见LZ说的那层意思==

Third, the fault of destroy scientific evidence is not blame to collectors. It is the universities who should stand that result. Because a large number of fossils make the study of scientists easier. But the universities do not have so much money to buy so many fossils.个人理解，这个理由是：虽然大量的为了经济利益的开发导致了一些数据被遗漏，但是它们至少保证了这些化石被发掘出来了

In brief, elaborate explanations are provided in lecture to prove the advantages is outweighing disadvantages for fossil trade.
建议LZ多看一些模板，尽量让自己的文章变得更为翔实
而且我和LZ对听力的理解有不少误差

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2月27 独立

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楼主君，请问您二月二十七的综合呢？

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There are certain considerations or factors that everyone takes into account in the meaning of life. However it is always confused us that what is the meaning of our life. (There are certain factors that need to be taken into account in the consideration of meaning of life. However, the problem about what is the true meaning of life always confused me.) Some people like to pay attention to achieving realistic goals, because it can be come true easily (it is easy to come true). This is in sharp contrast to the other people, who have ambitious dreams and goals which are hard to achieve(be achieved). As far as I am concerned, I side with the latter issue. My reasons are as follows.

First, ambitious dreams and goals are given propulsion for a man‘s shifting from ordinary to complete success. Take Putin as an example, Putin want(dreamed) to be president as(since) he was a child. To most of people(For most people), this is an ambitious dream which is hard to achieve. However, it is this ambitious dream push(that push) Putin to be more powerful(to become strong and powerful). He attends to(attended) a military school which can help him get power quicker(more quickly). The ambitious goal helps him to be a person who is diligent, determination, intelligent. Those of the virtues mentioned above help him to be selected as the second president in Russian.

Furthermore, when we achieve(when achieving) our goals which are difficult, we always feel happy. A recent survey, conducted by Sina.com, one of the most famous portal websites in China, offers a worldwide report about why we are happy. The result really surprised me a lot, over 69% of the voters claim that achieve a goals which are hard to do makes them happy, because they spent a lot of time to advance themselves in order to reach the height of the goals. There are also 13% of the voters say that it is love make them happy. And the other 18% persons have other reasons such as traveling around the world and so on. There is no doubt that people is happy when their payment have the reciprocation(when they earn reciprocation of the payment). So the ambitious goals will help people to be happier.

In addition, absolutely, realistic goals are easy to achieve, but there is little meaning for us. Our life will not be changed by them. Only they bring us is a short moment.(or what they brought to people is only short-term and small changes.)

About all the factors I mentioned above, I am totally for the opinion of people should follow the ambitious dreams and goals even though it is hard to achieve.

文章总体一般，但有不少的语法错误，举例论证有展开观点不错，
有些句子有问题，纯属个人意见

https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1332678-3-1.html

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