【Daily Writing Camp】岑小坏——为您奉上恶心的作文帖

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2.13 独立作文：
One of your classmates needs help with someschoolwork. Which solution would you recommend your classmate should do: to askyou for help or to find a professional tutor for help. Include reasons anddetails to in your response.

It iscommon for us students to come across some difficult schoolwork and of cause wewould like to ask someone for help. Comparatively speaking, I prefer seekinghelp from my classmates rather than a professional tutor.

First, weshould know why we have to do schoolwork every day. Learning knowledge is a progresshas to be done repeatedly. After listening to the teachers, taking necessarynotes, answering question, it’s time to have some schoolwork to review what wehave learned and develop further skills. Therefore, problems in schoolwork comefrom two aspects. One is we fail to understand every single knowledge in classand the other, we lack abilities to apply this knowledge. We should face theseproblems ourselves.

That’swhy I choose to ask a classmate’s help and recommend others do so. All of usshare the same class, some get the important knowledge but some does not. Whenwe ask for other people’s help, we should also figure out why they knew theanswer. Next time maybe schoolwork can be done easy and fast.

While weraise the difficult question to teachers or tutors, we certainly get thecorrect answer but also lose the chance to improve our abilities. It is justtoo easy. Only after a few hours hard-work can we enjoy the success thatproblem finally being solved.

I believediscussing difficult schoolwork with classmates is the best way to improveourselves. It is also good studying phenomena that teachers and tutors expectto see.


2.13 综合作文：
TPO4 Dinosaurs were not endotherms


Peoplealways think as a member of reptile family, dinosaurs could not maintain aninternal temperature as other endotherms do. Considering dinosaurs differ inmany ways from modem reptiles, some evidence suggest that dinosaurs may beendotherms. But the speaker think all this evidence is not strong enough to supportthe theory that dinosaurs were endotherms.

First,dinosaur fossils in Polar Regions does not mean dinosaurs can live in an extremelylow temperature without keeping themselves warm. In fact, the speaker point outit is more likely dinosaurs spend the summer in Polar Regions, which is muchmore warm than nowadays, and then migrate to another comfortable area like manyreptiles do.

Second,the leg position of dinosaurs has nothing to do with whether they wereendotherms. Dinosaurs were much larger than any species of reptile today. Itwas much hard for them to deal with their weigh. Gradually, their legs evolvedto be like endotherms in order to support their huge bodies.

And thethird theory, dinosaurs also have a kind of growth rings except those Haversiancanals. The growth rings indicate that dinosaurs grew much slower during coolertimes. This is not the character of endotherms, which means dinosaurs were notone species of them.




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本文严重求鞭笞 求凌辱……

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Peoplealways think as a member of reptile family, dinosaurs could not maintain aninternal temperature as other（赶脚去掉） endotherms do. Considering dinosaurs differ inmany ways from modem reptiles, some evidence（evidences） suggest that dinosaurs may beendotherms. But the speaker think all this evidence is not strong enough to supportthe theory that dinosaurs were endotherms.我赶脚。。。有点。。。罗嗦好像。。。要么勤换表达。。要么弄个从句塞一塞。。。

First,dinosaur fossils in Polar Regions does not mean dinosaurs can live in an extremelylow temperature without keeping themselves warm. In fact, the speaker point outit is more likely dinosaurs spend the summer（汗。。是summer吗。。。我听的只是说比较warmer的。。。 in Polar Regions, which is muchmore warm直接说much warmer than nowadays, and then migrate to another comfortable area like manyreptiles do when 天气冷了。。.  

Second,the leg position of dinosaurs has nothing to do with whether they wereendotherms. Dinosaurs were much larger than any species of reptile today. Itwas much hard for them to deal with their weigh. Gradually, their legs evolvedto be like endotherms in order to support their huge bodies.

And thethird theory, dinosaurs also have a kind of growth rings except those Haversiancanals. The growth rings indicate that dinosaurs grew much slower during coolertimes. This is not the character of endotherms, which means dinosaurs were notone species of them.

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People always think as a member of reptile family, dinosaurs could not maintain an internal temperature as other endotherms do. Considering dinosaurs differ in many ways from modem reptiles, some evidence suggests that dinosaurs may be endotherms. But the speaker thinks all this evidence is not strong enough to support the theory that dinosaurs were endotherms." @) a$ p( P# R3 E$ F
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First, dinosaur fossils in Polar Regions does not mean dinosaurs can live in an extremely low temperature without keeping themselves warm. In fact, the speaker point（points） out it is more likely dinosaurs spend the summer in Polar Regions, which is(was) much more warm than nowadays, and then migrate(要用过去时哦) to another comfortable area like many reptiles do.8 _- \1 S" H% v, |8 j5 Q0 [
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Second, the leg position of dinosaurs has nothing to do with whether they were endotherms. Dinosaurs were much larger than any species of reptile today. It was much hard for them to deal with their weigh. Gradually, their legs evolved to be like endotherms in order to support their huge bodies.
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综合啥的，貌似没啥语法错误就没啥好改了哦。。。观点清晰，要点齐全，语言流畅。。。求回改啊哈哈~~~

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