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发表于 2012-2-17 16:55:15 |显示全部楼层
终于开始奋战作文了,努力努力啊~~~求猛批!
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发表于 2012-2-17 16:56:54 |显示全部楼层
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Patient is usually not a good thing, we should take actions at once.

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There exist certain circumstances which we should do at once. When we are facing people who are in danger, think of a solution patiently on how to save them can possibly miss the proper time to rescue. However, I disagree with the statement because in most cases, patient is a highly superior to us individuals, but is also of vital importance in a broader aspect, such as to the government.

In everyday life, we face challenges all the time, and it is easy to lose ourselves. Instead of dealing with them aimlessness in a hurry, being patient is beneficial for us to figure out our purpose and thus come up with the right solution, which will quite likely in return, save us more time. I was once given three weeks to do an assignment to figure out how to start a brushless motor. Due to lacking of careful plan on that project, my motor damaged during my first experiment. This costs me almost a week to repair, which was a huge loss to me. Learned from that mistake, I changed my attitude in the next two weeks and design the procedure cautiously. Following this plan, I did the experiment smoothly and finished the assignment on time. By thinking over the plan patiently, we solve our problem more efficiently, because this will reduce us the possibilities to make mistakes.

Consider the statement in a broader aspect, when our government is cooperating or competing with others, dealing patiently can avoid collisions. Collisions will surely do harm to the improvement in economy or the polity of the country. For example, some of our fish men were being capture illegally in 2011, and a lot of Chinese urged that the government should use the military force and fight against them. If behave in this way, a war will definitely break out between countries, which requires great amount of financial support. This will damage our economy. T the environment can also be damaged through the process of the war. The government, considering this patiently, decides to try to make a peace on that. The result turned out to be perfect. We have our fish men back peacefully.

In all, when facing problems, it is not often right to do it at once. Being patient, on the other hand, is more beneficial to us.
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发表于 2012-2-18 21:51:16 |显示全部楼层
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You can know a lot about a person through the types of friends this person has.

这个题目感觉有点变态啊。。。感觉真难写啊。。。下面贴我的essay,互批啊~~~
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发表于 2012-2-18 21:51:30 |显示全部楼层
One can definitely know some information to a certain person by observing the types of his friends. However, it is not true when you acclaim that through this way, one can acquire a lot about this person. Because the amount of information that we can learn varies in different situations,

The boundary of person from whom we can know a lot or little is his capability to control himself. When referring someone that controls himself well, the environment has little function to him, thus barely any correlations can be deduced from the environment surrounds him. I have a classmate in senior high. He can make friends to anyone, he made friends with students who are with high honor and grade, but he can also made friends with some others that was considered as bad behaved students. So, knowing what type of friend he made is meaningless since he can make friends with all kind.

However, to those who need support from friends, who need others to help him improving, the statement is correct. Because this kind of person want to make friends with those acquire certain ability of what he desires, or own the skill that compensate with him. Making friends with those of high honor surely prove that this person has the willingness to improve himself. On the contrary, spending all time with poorly behaved person showed that he lacks the sense of keep learning. In this way, by watching the type of friends one makes, we can learn better about this person.

In all, the statement is partially correct. We can get to know a lot about a person through the type of his friends when he can be easily influenced by his surroundings. However, to those who have fully control to themselves and keep his own character in any environment, little information can be acquired.
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