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题目是TPO17的：Most advertisemens make product much better than they really are.只写了350字吧。
正文：There is no denying that TV commercials and other advertisements have been exerting dramatic influences on people's daily lives, creating enormous interests for businessmen. Advertisements help consumers to fully understand what the products are and then they are willing to buy the products.However,from my point of view, most advertisements make products seem much better than they really are, by which  I mean, their functions or real condition are exaggerated.
    Advertisements can be seen everywhere,from huge billboards along the highway to the stickers posted on the showing cases in campus. Ads almost appear whenever human beings show up. It's their great power to persuade people to buy products that ads are so favored by businessmen. And it is exactly the beautiful pictures and lovely stories presented shown the ads that make people want to open their pockets.  
    As a matter of fact, ads usually are not as the same as what the products really are. Basically, every piece of advertisement is "reproduced" and the pictures are made to look more interesting or more delicious than before. Through the reproduction, products in the advertisments are what the customers really like. For example, the  hamburgers in Burger King's ads look big,delicious and colorful, and each piece of steak or pork look thick. While when we buy a burger from the shop, we will find the seemingly "huge delicious burger" is only as big as an egg,with the small piece of vegetable, the steak only a slim piece inside of it. This is how an advertisement work:to make the products better than they really are, so that even products with poor qualities can attract customers and sell good. Since this phenomenon is obvious and common in the business world, consimers don't even consider it as a great problem.
    Although there really are advertisements which just reflect what  the products really are, ads exaggeration is a common thing. Many customers criticize this, but at the same time, they continue to buy the product.

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恩  谢谢提醒~

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