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When asking whether to pursue their ambitious and goals they are not realistic or to focus on achieve realistic goals, many people will think that achieving ambitious dreams and goals are
more challenging and will be praised by people. However, from my point of view, I am clined to those who focus on achieve realistic goals. My arguments are listed as followed.

First of all, Owning a realistic goal really means a lot. Supposing that you are a young man who had a dream for being as an astronant, but your physical standard and other limits such as the short-eyed and have a fear to look around from top of objects. So, without these basic materials, your ambitious dreams are no more than a daydream and fuss. Obviously, your dreams for becoming a teacher or a doctor may be more accessible and pleasant for you to choose.

In addition, some realistic goals you are chasing for sometimes will benefit more than your unproductive dreams. For instance, campared with the ambitious dreams, you will plan and carry out its procedures , which may take you much time conceive a promising and creative idea to go on to the nest step. However, once you choose to follow the realistic idea, you will be much confident and motivated to be occupied in your working.

To be honest, ther are also some merits and advantages to follow the ambitious dreams and goals. The most main advantage is that you are interested and obsessed with what you are looking forward to doing and thus you may create some amazing ideas, which ought to be fantastic.

Above all, I am firmly believe to that people should fouse on achieving realistic goals.

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