issue154

alexandra8204UID: 138807

In this world, everything has its own complexities and diversities and so does education. It's a comprehensive process that strikingly involves so many facets such as transmission of moral values, individual intelligence, and all kinds of scientific and technological skills,etc, and it is also a perpetuated project instead of a temporary one. Due to so many complicated aspects related, Our educational task cannot be transferred merely to the professional educators----- only one tiny group of the whole social community.

What is our education for? Does anybody argue that education is just a way of transmitting specific knowledge and a tool for a decent job in future?If the answer is no, we have to admit other significant goals of our education such as sound moral values,life skills,and other experiences gained outside the classroom. Then can our professional educator accomplish all these crucial tasks alone? Definite no. First, we concede that our educators today are the leaders in the whold education system and are possibly the biggiest contributor since they provide students with voluminous amounts of scientific and technical knowledge including some moral values in all. However, they are not omnipotent as other creatures in this world too. There are too many things our students have to learn from the real social or life experiences rather than only from the books or oral expressions. For example, cooking, washing clothes, tidying the room are all our day-to-day routines that you have to face everyday and they are a few of the numerous basic living skills in our modern life . But it is common today that many college students cannot handle these somewhat superficial problems when they have some stunning power to solve many difficult dasks in science. Addionally, suppose that you are left alone in some deserted places because of an accident, how can you survive without knowing how to make a fire and protect yourself from wild animals or the inclement weather?They are all skills you cannot learn merely from some professional educators in the local school. You have to grasp most of these necessary skills from other ways such as extracurricular books,broadcast media, your family members or friends. All these paths have a direct correlation with our whole communities. Therefor, all these insolved have the responsibility to complete the whole education.

Also, it is common sense that education is a life long concept, far from schooling, which merely requires several years maybe ten or fifteen. Consequently, we have to emphasize every phase of our education. Before going to a school, parents have the undeniable responsibility to pour some prime moralities and intellectual skills into their children, Enlightenment is the first step, but also one of the most important ones in everybody's educational life. Many of the characters are formed in this phase. At the same time, the living environment is also a key point to this pristine enlightment period when children haven't attended schools. It is by no means uncommon that children who live in a family full of love and care are much more prone to become a happy, healthy, successful people than those who lives in a violent family when they are growing up. Family especially our parents play a radical role in our life.

Moreover, there are many social problems at this time are related to the youngsters such as teenage pregnancy, alcoholism, reckless driving, drug use, etc. As a result, an urgency to pay attention to our young generations draws every warm heart's attention. Thus, these threatening social problems need the involvement of every memeber in our society not only our educators.

In conclusion, paying more attention to these students, not only in the specific schooling aspect, but all and joining together to face this tough, but unutterably important education, we'll realize all the sweet dreams.

realturtleUID: 69047

^_^，再不看都不好意思啦
In this world, everything has its own complexities and diversities and so does education. It's a comprehensive process that strikingly involves so many facets such as transmission of moral values, individual intelligence, and all kinds of scientific and technological skills,etc, and it is also a perpetuated project instead of a temporary one. Due to so many complicated aspects related, Our educational task cannot be transferred merely to the professional educators----- only one tiny group of the whole social community.

What is our education for? Does anybody argue that education is just a way of transmitting specific knowledge and a tool for a decent job in future?If the answer is no, we have to admit other significant goals of our education such as sound moral values,life skills,and other experiences gained outside the classroom. Then can our professional educator accomplish all these crucial tasks alone? Definitely no. First, we concede that our educators today are the leaders in the whold education system and are possibly the biggiest contributor since they provide students with voluminous amounts of scientific and technical knowledge including some moral values in all. However, they are not omnipotent as other creatures in this world too(either?). There are too many things our students have to learn from the real social or life experiences rather than only from the books or oral expressions(oral presentations). For example, cooking, washing clothes, tidying the room are all our day-to-day routines that you have to face everyday(已有day-to-day，去掉everyday较好) and they are a few of the numerous basic living skills in our modern life . But it is common today that many college students cannot handle these somewhat superficial problems when they have some stunning power to solve many difficult dasks in science. Addionally, suppose that you are left alone in some deserted places because of an accident, how can you survive without knowing how to make a fire and protect yourself from wild animals or the inclement weather?They are all skills you cannot learn merely from some professional educators in the local school. You have to grasp most of these necessary skills from other ways such as extracurricular books,broadcast media, your family members or friends. All these paths have a direct correlation with our whole communities. Therefor, all these insolved have the responsibility to complete the whole education. 这段讲学校教育无法顾及的方面。

Also, it is common sense that education is a life long concept, far from schooling, which merely requires several years maybe ten or fifteen. Consequently, we have to emphasize every phase of our education. Before going to school, parents have the undeniable responsibility to pour some prime moralities and intellectual skills into their children, Enlightenment is the first step, but also one of the most important ones in everybody's educational life. Many of the characters are formed in this phase. At the same time, the living environment is also a key point to this pristine enlightment period when children haven't attended schools. It is by no means uncommon that children who live in a family full of love and care are much more prone to become a happy, healthy, successful people than those who lives in a violent family when they are growing up. Family especially our parents play a radical role in our life. 这段讲教育的阶段性和环境的影响。

Moreover, there are many social problems at this time are related to the youngsters such as teenage pregnancy, alcoholism, reckless driving, drug use, etc. As a result, an urgency to pay attention to our young generations draws every warm heart's attention. Thus, these threatening social problems need the involvement of every memeber in our society not only our educators. 这段应该是讲社会各方面包括教育者一起重视教育的紧迫性？^_^

In conclusion, paying more attention to these students, not only in the specific schooling aspect(schooling 是个名词，表示学校教育，此处可去掉aspect0, but all the other aspects as well and joining hands together to face this tough, but unutterably important education, we'll realize all the sweet dreams.

写得不错哦！

alan_903UID: 110685

你真的能在45分钟内写完这些吗？需要注意一下取舍的节奏，否则会写不完的呀

alexandra8204UID: 138807

的确超时 现在还在联系阶段 训练思想和语言
下面要记时了
谢谢两位忠告 ：）

imongUID: 140258

这个是issue130吗？怎么看起来和socialization关系不大，而且根本没有提及However那一段（除非不同意前半）

alexandra8204UID: 138807

？？？？

130. "How children are socialized today determines the destiny of society. Unfortunately, we have not yet learned how to raise children who can help bring about a better society."

求指点

alexandra8204UID: 138807

完了完了 题目写错了 不是130 是154
154. "Both parents and communities must be involved in the local schools. Education is too important to leave solely to a group of professional educators."

晕 求大侠给意见：）