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It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician. Discuss both these views and give ur own opinion.


When it comes to the discussion whether any ordinary child can be educated to become a successful athlete or musician, people hold different views. It is high time we discussed the truth behind this issue.

On one side of the picture, some proponents embrace that everyone can be possibly, if not effectively, taught to make great achievement. Specifically, with average IQ and EQ levels, children are able to obtain various knowledge and skills for training, a theory which indicates that every people has ability to be successful if making sufficient effect under reasonable training. Moreover, talents take a great amount of training to fulfill their potential as well even if they seem to have inherent advantages compared to others. Namely, the unique key to transform into a valuable sport man or musician is training correctly. Hence, those ordinary people who have average ability also can gain high honor by hard-working.

On the other side of the picture, others undermine that majority of human race are impossible to be as great successful as talents. When talents and ordinary people take the same program relatively, talents always best represent their natural advantages——completing the task rapidly, if not perfectly. Nevertheless, I suppose that any people can spend more hours on training to cover the inherent shortcoming to get great achievement like talents, a methodology which enable everyone to chase dream.

Hence, chronic effect should be taken in sport’s or music’s career. In addition, key to get successful to people is combining reasonable training and according knowledge.

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