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发表于 2012-3-30 09:57:35 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览
新人小白..  昨天的贴不小心盗用了别人的名字..今天新开一个贴.今天晚上会写30号的作文..先占座..欢迎大家多多来捧场拍砖..同时对Arthur2012表示歉意.小白不懂规矩..望多多谅解..
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先附上一篇刚开始写过的..感觉写的很差..希望各位高手帮帮忙..修改一下,拍拍砖...

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现在还没弄明白怎么添加附件..希望哪位高手教育一下..这次就直接粘上来了..

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People should sometimes do things they do not enjoy doing. Use specific reasons examples to support your answer.

  Everyone has its likes and dislikes. In recent survey, people in growing numbers are forced to face a great number of economic problems like high medical expenses and rising housing prices, which are now extremely puzzling millions of Chinese people. Therefore, many poverty farmers have to do physical labor more than 12 hours a day for the sake of survival. However, everything has two sides. Although people can get high reward by doing something they dislike, we have to look at the other side of coin, that is doing things we like is more beneficial to us than we dislike.There are 2 reasons to support my opinion.
  First of all, doing things we like enable us to achieve meaningful goals. To illustrate this, there is an appropriate example showing Steve Jobs’s success. He attended the REED College only to found that the subject he chose did not suit him. Hence, he bravely decided to drop out as well as followed his preference. In a remarkable turn of events, he started a company named Apple which now becoming a most influential company in the world. As we can see, Jobs’s success, in other words, is not only linked to his wise option to dr out ,but also owe to his courageous courage to follow his inner voice that is to do what he tend to.
  Although the first reason I mentioned above is probably the most essential reason, it is not the only explanation for why I choose to. From my perspective of view, only doing things we prefer to do can we be efficient at work. For instance, an English studying investigation indicate that an average number of English words that college and university students understand is almost 4500. Furthermore, 80 percent of students who knows more than 4500 words is suggested to fond of English. This phenomenon shows do favorable thing is more likely to be sufficient.
  Although doing things that we do not enjoy sometimes can bring more money to us, at the same time, it is surely to cause many physical and mental problems like having much too pressure and failing to fall asleep. By contrast, doing things we prefer to is crucial to keep expeditious at work ever at life, which I consider is the same business to earn much money because happiness is forever an endless wealth. From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw a conclusion that doing things we enjoy doing that make our lives enjoyable and meaningful

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发表于 2012-3-30 19:37:39 |只看该作者
晕了,你怎么有两个贴,我一下子没缓过来。还以为把给你改的发给了别人。。。

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发表于 2012-3-30 19:42:00 |只看该作者
4# 秋雨荆州

实在不好意思哈..那个帖子以为名字错了..想新开一个贴..结果发现可以改名字的..对不起了哈..以后就用那个帖子吧..这个就沉了吧..实在不好意思了咯...

以后还请多多关照..
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发表于 2012-4-13 16:09:50 |只看该作者
呼呼~发现你的另一个老巢
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6# 青鱼

这个完全是个意外..哈哈..当初刚来不了解情况...
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