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工作一年突然决定考托出国，英语丢了好几年，刚开始真的很费劲。下面二十几天的计划如下：双休日：每天一套完整的题  
工作日：两天一套题（包括作文），一次听写。
写作文遇到最大的问题是没话可说，可能也跟中文的作文有关。也管不了那么多了，每次都把自己写的文章po上来，接受大家的鄙视与修改。


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1# xuguanglong 已改 Apr.4.xuguanglong.doc (26.5 KB, 下载次数: 6)

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2# 可他媽學點習吧
thx very much

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? There will be fewer car in use than there are today.
With the development of our society, there are more and more people would like to have a car of their own due to the fact that they are making more and more money than before and cars are really necessary in their daily life. Not only will cars bring more pleasure to our life, they can also make our life more efficient. Meanwhile, to those business people, buying a car may means more opportunities to make more money. So I disagree with the argument that in twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today.

Cars will make our life more enjoy. It is not only just a transportation vehicle, but also a very important aspect of a happy life. Imaging driving a car to another city during the weekend with your family member and some of your friends, how delightful it is! Enjoying the beautiful scenery and sharing happiness with your friend will help to alleviate your work stress and peer pressure. You can refresh yourself and go back to work energetically.

Driving to work is so comfortable that it will enable us to work efficiently. Nowadays many people live far away from where their working place, taking a bus to work might be many people's first choice. However the bus is so crowded that you can get sweate all through your body when you get to your company, which may influence your working performance greatly. See how necessary to own a car yourself, there is no need to catch the crowded bus and have a good mood to work efficiently.

It is undeniable fact that cars are indispensable to businessmen. Business people travel a lot to meet their clients and to open a potential market in a different city. It's a hard to imagine a businessman without a car. Time is money. They should get to the city wherever there is an opportunity as soon as possible, or they may miss plenty of chances to advance their business. Since the public transportation such like trains and buses will not operate according to a single person’s needs, it’s really necessary for business people to possess their own car.

More happiness in life, efficiency in your work and opportunities to get rich by owning a car will make it plays a more and more important role in our life. All in all, with all the benefits that cars can bring to us, it is obviously that there will be more and more car in twenty years.

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4# xuguanglong 没人改啊 顶啊

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5# xuguanglong

改好了

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问问你们的群号是多少啊 我也4月28号考，想参加进来。谢谢啊

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加油..我也4.28考的...过下就给你改

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加油..

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7# 恶魔左使 我不也知道群号

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6# cherish2332 谢谢  晚上回来帮你回改

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9# yyyfor 谢谢  晚上回来帮你回改

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4.7Life is easier than it is when your grandparents were children?
Imaging the living situation sixty years ago, when my grandparents were still children, that is so hard for them to get enough food to eat and a stable environment to live due to the Second World War. Nowadays, our generation has favored a prosperous and peaceful society which makes our life more enjoyable and convenient.
        It is undeniable that we have more ways to entertainment during our sparing time. Playing online games, watching a movie on a compute or playing football with my team member makes our life so colorful and delightful. When our grandparents were children, their primary concern is to get enough food and to move from one place to another to escape from the war. Living under starvation and fear makes them have less pleasure time than we have.
        Children now in China are receiving nine years compulsory education for free and a large portion of them will continue to study in the university or study aboard to pursuit a better life. There are also easier for people to get various learning material with the rapid access to Internet. People today consider learning a lifelong process rather than just in school. It's hard for our grandparents to get educated due to the facts that most schools were closed and most families can not afford tuition at the same time.
        With the fast transportation system, we can go to different cities of China within just a few hours which might take a few days six decades ago. Once my grandma told me a story that our whole family cost about more ten days to move to my hometown from shanghai, where was a battle field then. Today, we take a bus to shanghai after lunch in the afternoon and arrive in shanghai in the evening, the right time to have supper.
        With all the facts listed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that our life definitely changed a lot and it's becoming more and more suitable for us to live. With the fruits of economic development and technology advancement, life today is much easier than it was sixty years ago.

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