5g 日记贴-第一篇作文，欢迎批评！

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Atthe beginning of the passage, the writer supposed that there was a particulardistinctive pattern which could distinguish it from other baskets, but thewriter did not give the evidences that the archaeologists could just fulfillthe works just with that distinctive patter. That is the faults of discriminatethem would make the conclusion just not be the same, and therefore it is reallyvital to get the evidence that the two pattern are just the same but not thesimilarity.

Inaddition, there are not justifications which would define the baskets are just originatedfrom the village of Palea, that is, if the baskets are just first made inLithos or Palea, and there are others transportations that would make thebaskets across the river. For example, there are bridges or other land-wayswhich could just give a media to take the baskets across the river to the otherland-side. Or another possibility is that the basket could just float in theriver by itself, and the other side people could learn from the fractions ofthe basket. Then there would be the same kind of baskets on both sides of theriver, and this would undermine the conclusion and get that the basket is justonly originated from Palea.

Whatis more, all the above conclusions were just based on the assumptions thatthere were rivers at that time, but in fact there may be not that river or theriver was not that deep or wide enough to prevent people from crossing it. Theweather is changing all the time on the earth, which makes us hard to imaginewhat the world is looking like years ago. For instance, there used to be ariver behind my family's house but as the time flies and the high temperaturegoes higher in summer nowadays the river has gone. It has the same likelihoodthat with that long time has passed and the river could just not be there or bedried up at that time too. At this point, the basket is also unique in Paleanfor people could just cross the river by foot.

Aboveall, as the three issues I just put aside above, there would be three otherproblems which should be justified by the evidences and just through theseevidences which could be put forward that we could draw the conclusion whetherthe basket is just unique in Palean.   





Issue 。


Whenit comes to the issue whether high schools should set up regulations to strainall the students in the same national curriculum, the majority of peopleconceive that juvenile students are so young to choose curriculum themselvesthat they are vulnerable and un-thoughtful about their future, but the othersargue that the hobbies should be supported before they are too old and get theadvantages with their age. From my own perspective, the latter is favorable.

Foroverbearing and foremost is that there are so many occupations that have to be cultivatedin their young age. With the high development of the communications andtechnologies, students are engaged in all kinds of studies in order to get agood future which would always include high salaries and good conditions, andtherefore with this intention parents have to apply for all kinds of out-classesfor their children to upgrade their competence in the ages. Heavy homework inthe school and occupied time after class make the students nowadays wear outthemselves, what is more, it cause so many disaffection among the youngers.They escape from school and drop their families and this also a reason for thejuvenile crime, the reason for all this might be the peremptory and worthless classesin the school which the children have no interest at all.

Additionally,if the students could make the choice themselves, both they and their parentswould live happier lives. The saying goes that freedom is of the greatest importancein people lives. That is everyone should be given the same right to do whatthey like as occupation or vocation. As for me, in fact I was really obsessedin tele-things when I was young and that time I just did a lot of works, asfixing the radio box for my grandparents, mending the tele-control unit for myparents and so forth, although sometimes I would make the things into wrongconditions, my parents just appreciated my former good jobs and congratulatedme to work on without urging me to just fulfill all the wearisome and onerous homeworkin the school. Thanks for them, now, I am still doing the works as an engineerand not having any rue of being contempt of myself wasting time in working on apiano or the wearisome curriculum in the school.

Aboveall, the students should be given the right attitude that they could choosewhat they like, and taking advantages of the young age they would practicetheir little hobbies into occupation or even glory. Without wasting time in thebore some and tedious national curriculum, they could make the nation more andmore developed and that is more of a good future for the whole nation.

liang0603UID: 3182007

4.17  早上8:30 起床，无午休，上午 新概念英语4学习，下午 OG，难句！加油！

liang0603UID: 3182007

4.18 手机坏了

ylhchdUID: 3055726

加油！

liang0603UID: 3182007

4.19 9点，单词，新概念4，难句。。。。晚上去打球，，，，老板电话问项目怎么样了，直接回复说要考试了，竟然没有被批，还说加油，感激啊！！！！:mad: 一定不辜负厚望！

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20.昨天的memo单词留多了，今天太多不认识的，所以竟然刷了一天才结束。。。。纠结大家都出去玩了，我一个人好单调。。。。周五就不淡定了，哎。

liang0603UID: 3182007

21 kindle ....

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22.23  excise 1-2，新概念lesson 18，单词。

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At the beginning of the passage, the writer supposed that there was a particular distinctive pattern which could distinguish it from other baskets, but the writer did not give the evidences that the archaeologists could just fulfill the works just with that distinctive patter. That is the faults of discriminate them would make the conclusion just not be the same, and therefore it is really vital to get the evidence that the two pattern are just the same but not the similarity.

In addition, there are not justifications which would define the baskets are just originated from the village of Palea, that is, if the baskets are just first made in Lithos or Palea, and there are others transportations that would make the baskets across the river. For example, there are bridges or other land-ways which could just give a media to take the baskets across the river to the other land-side. Or another possibility is that the basket could just float in the river by itself, and the other side people could learn from the fractions of the basket. Then there would be the same kind of baskets on both sides of the river, and this would undermine the conclusion and get that the basket is just only originated from Palea.

What is more, all the above conclusions were just based on the assumptions that there were rivers at that time, but in fact there may be not that river or the river was not that deep or wide enough to prevent people from crossing it. The weather is changing all the time on the earth, which makes us hard to imagine what the world is looking like years ago. For instance, there used to be a river behind my family's house but as the time flies and the high temperature goes higher in summer nowadays the river has gone. It has the same likelihood that with that long time has passed and the river could just not be there or be dried up at that time too. At this point, the basket is also unique in Palean for people could just cross the river by foot.

Above all, as the three issues I just put aside above, there would be three other problems which should be justified by the evidences and just through these evidences which could be put forward that we could draw the conclusion whether the basket is just unique in Palean.

PigsJourneyUID: 3214294

5# liang0603


你老板真是好人哪，我跟老板说要考试老板很愤怒的说你自己的论文什么后果自己承担，吓得我啥也不说了

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10# PigsJourney
呵呵，我以为你是来拍作文的，。

pine_yangUID: 2959603

你这篇issue限时了吗？

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12# pine_yang
限时了，第一次写30分钟，之后还改了下。