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[经典批改讨论] issue116 关于全球化 提供一个经典论据与大家分享:比较优势理论 [复制链接]

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发表于 2003-9-13 00:59:47 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览
David Ricardo的the Law of Comparative Advantage,被认为是经济学中不多的几个被现实证明具有普遍适用性的理论之一(Samulson语),与全球化有关的题目都可以用

Issue116 "With the growth of global networks in such areas as economics and communication, there is no doubt that every aspect of the society -- including education, politics, the arts and the sciences -- will benefit greatly from international influences.

I fundamentally agree with the contention in the title statement that, with the growth of global network in many areas, every aspect will benefit from international influences more or less. However, the continually appearing harmful byproducts of globalization, though maybe not so disturbing right now, calls for a more comprehensive and balanced view in which the positive and negative influences are both considered.

Admittedly, globalization is a process leading to improving productivity in increasing national welfare in every country who participates in it. As David Ricardo, one of the most important economist of the Classical Political Economics, brilliantly illustrated as the famous Law of Comparative Advantage, "Even if one nation is less efficient than other countries in every commodities, there is still a basis for mutually beneficial trade, when every nation keep producing commodity in which its comparative advantage (presenting as comparative price in a monetary society) is greater and exchange with other countries for other products." Nowadays, not only has this principle been proved right in economic area, but in culture, politics, education and social spheres, it becomes a fundamental rule and primary notion based on which the policies are established. Thus the idea is widely accepted that material progress and well-being of one country will do good to that of others.

However, when we enjoy the advantages of the globalization, there are still many disconcerting phenomenon along with this process. First of all, more and more multinationals from developed countries locate their manufacturing departments, which produce much pollution, in developing countries like Thailand, Vietnam and China, while leave their Research&Development sectors at home for some cost-saving reasons. But this aggregates the environmental deterioration and industry structure laggard in the developing countries. In other words, people in these countries will suffer the potential dangers from international influences.

In addition, too rapid globalization help deracinate some cultures in powerless position. As an example, in China, fewer and fewer children and youth are interested in the Chinese Opera, not to say take it as a career. Their most favorite singers are Branny Spears and Robby Williams who are popular all over the world. But, can you simply conclude that R&B and Rap music is of more values to the young people in China than the Chinese Opera that has a history of over 2000 years? Actually, though energy- and time-consuming, it is one of the most important responsibilities, as a member of the society, to protect those ancient cultures from being bogged down in the Sargasso sea of modern culture when we keep on with the globalization.

Finally, the loss of intelligence is another dilemma confronted by developing countries in these days. Whether supported by national scholarship or self-financed, many students from these countries maintain a further education in western countries. Nevertheless, when they find satisfying job opportunities, they will probably not go back and work for their motherland. Unfortunately, this part of students is always among the most intelligent human resources of the country, who are supposed to be the main force to construct the country. This kind of destruction to a society can even not be measured by money.

To sum up, without a open attitude to the world, a nation becomes myopic and eventually inefficient. Without considering the negative influences brought by the process of globalization, nations, especially the developing countries, will suffer from the latent destructions sooner or later. Though we may not accuse globalization for all the harms, it is advisable for everyone to pay our attention to it and do our best to constrain the bad effects to the least. Otherwise, it is unprofitable to choose construct the global networks, not only to us, but to our descendants.
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发表于 2003-9-13 01:33:40 |只看该作者
写的很好哦
尤其是论据
很丰富!
向你学习
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发表于 2003-9-13 10:19:12 |只看该作者
没有看得很细,但是感觉用词和结构都很不错
如果我没记错的话,似乎比你前两次的文章进步不少
Rien de réel ne peut être menacé.
Rien d'irréel n'existe.

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发表于 2003-9-13 12:16:49 |只看该作者
不错
是模仿那个ets的六分范文写的
无论从行文结构,语言风格以及个别语言上
不知道考试可否这样?
不过是真的写得不错!

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发表于 2003-9-13 14:29:38 |只看该作者
写得很实际,没有照搬照抄别人的风格,应该学习!
我9/25考,现在水平还比较次,希望到时也能写成这样的文章。
BTW,如果你参加前年的ERICSSON&21 century的全国征文大赛(Globalization)的话,我想第一名非你莫属:)

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