issue131

chenguang104UID: 125198

我斗胆基于I 131现场做了个LIVE版本，当然我水平很次的，只是做一下练习（GTER中我想没有比我在ISSUE更次的人了）
关于131. "The arts (painting, music, literature, etc.) reveal the otherwise hidden ideas and impulses of a society。

I no doubt agree with this point of view that the art (painting, music, literature, etc) reveal the hidden ideas and impulses of a society. Some people take it into consideration that arts are the appeared forms of a society; but the other people believe that the ideas and the impulses of a society cannot be embodied through the arts. No matter what kind of the opinions different people hold, due to their own respective background, we should admit that arts contribute a lot to our society more or less. Fundamentally, the final judgment should rely on the examinations we will see as follows then some people may change their ideas that arts really are the forms of the ideas and impulses of a society.

First, the arts aim at depicting the feelings and attitudes of individuals. As far as know the old adage "Art originates from life but higher than life." which exactly illustrate that art is coming from the life of people's opinion to a society. From this, we could understand that the real society through the arts. No doubt, arts come to appear in terms of painting, music, literature, etc which actually embody the real life of the feelings and attitudes of the individuals. Therefore, these kinds of the arts more or less reveal the real life. For instance, the greatest exoterica "Dream of the Red Mansion (Chamber)", one of the famous ancient Chinese fictions, depicts the real life of a rich noble family in Thing Dynasty, from which we could learn the situation of the nobles' luxury life. Nowadays, the "Dream of the Red Mansion" is considered to be the most significant fictions in ancient literature the entire world. Of course, there emerge lots of kinds of these works in the brilliant world. So we could see how the form arts express the ideas and impulses of one corner of a society.

In the second place, paintings and music most vividly embody the spirit and characters of a society. In the process of the history, people make painting and music the most expressing ways of the spirits of a society. In this circumstance, we could clearly observe that the spirits and characters of a society are much relevant to its arts forms. Take Beethoven, the most distinguished music composers, for example, he composed lots of piano songs, which win the universal praise and made a great contribution to the music literature. From his compositions, we could dig out the strong spirits and characters of that kind of society. What's more, the impetus of spirits in his works may encourage us to advance bravely.

Through reading literature, we get to know that not only the experience of a society, but also the hidden idea and impulses of the society. In this case, it illustrates the point that the level of our society in literature is at a stage in which we order to take advantages of the arts which is available to us. Thus, we could benefit from arts and learn arts well by using the spirits depicted in them for a much better society. Therefore, the arts, which are beneficial to us, play a significant role in studying a society.

To sum up, we considered that the arts (painting, music, literature, etc) actually reveal the hidden ideas and impulses of a society. Thanks to the contribution, our society could consistently make a brilliant progress in the process of human civilization. In a long run, arts are essential and primary in our daily life for their spiritual contribution to countries and peoples of all over the world.

chenguang104UID: 125198

BTW，问一下，ISSUE多少字才够呢？
我知道我的字数肯定不够：（

ceciliarenUID: 138976

500以上吧，大家好像都能写道这个字数

chenguang104UID: 125198

我想我的文章太过于简单话，
我9/25考，不知还有没提高的可能啊？

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131. "The arts (painting, music, literature, etc.) reveal the otherwise hidden ideas and impulses of a society。

I no doubt agree with this point of view that the arts (painting, music, literature, etc) reveal the hidden ideas and impulses of a society. Some people take into consideration that arts are the appeared forms of a society; but the other people believe that the ideas and the impulses of a society cannot be embodied through the arts. No matter what kind of opinions different people hold, due to their own respective backgrounds, we should admit that arts contribute a lot to our society more or less.这里为何用due to这句啊？和你的we should有什么关系？ Fundamentally, the final judgment should rely on the examinations we will see as follows then some people may change their ideas that arts really are the forms of the ideas and impulses of a society.少用主观的we, I 等。

First, the arts aim at depicting the feelings and attitudes of individuals. As far as we know the old adage "Art originates from life but higher than life." which exactly illustrates that art comes from the life of people's opinions of a society. From this, we could understand that the real society through the arts. No doubt, arts come to appear in terms of painting, music, literature, etc which actually embody the real life of the feelings and attitudes of the individuals. Therefore, these kinds of the arts more or less reveal the real life. 怎么感觉你在重复说理？For instance, the greatest exoterica "Dream of the Red Mansion (Chamber)",这里直接说the story of the stones外国人一看便知是红楼梦 one of the famous ancient Chinese fictions, depicts the real life of a rich noble family in the Qing Dynasty, from which we could learn the situation of the nobles' luxury life. Nowadays, the "Dream of the Red Mansion" is considered to be the most significant fictions in ancient literature of the entire world. Of course, there emerge lots of kinds of these works in the brilliant world. So we could see how the form arts express the ideas and impulses of one corner of a society.感觉你说理和举例的确比较大白话。of one corner? of every corner吧？

In the second place, paintings and music most vividly embody the spirit and characters of a society. In the process of the history, people make painting and music the most expressive ways of the spirits of a society. In this circumstance, we could clearly observe that the spirits and characters of a society have much relevant to its arts forms. Take Beethoven, the most distinguished music composers, for example, he composed lots of piano songs, which win universal praise and 应该是人做出贡献，歌曲赢得赞誉made a great contribution to the music literature. From his compositions, we could dig out the strong spirits and characters of that kind of society. 为什么是社会的spirit和character呢？这里论述没有讲清楚，很容易反驳你说这是反映的他个人的feelings啊？What's more, the impetus of spirits in his works may encourage us to advance bravely.这句又对论证你的观点有何意义呢？

Through reading literature, we get to know that not only the experience of a society, but also the hidden ideas and impulses of the society. In this case, it illustrates the point that the level of our society in literature is at a stage in which we order to take advantages of the arts which is available to us. 这句似乎不通Thus, we could benefit from arts and learn arts well by using the spirits depicted in them for a much better society. Therefore, the arts, which are beneficial to us, play a significant role in studying a society.一定beneficial吗？说理似乎还没论述清楚就匆忙下了结论了。

To sum up, we considered that the arts (painting, music, literature, etc) actually reveal the hidden ideas and impulses of a society. Thanks to the contribution, our society could consistently make a brilliant progress in the process of human civilization. In a long run, arts are essential and primary in our daily life for their spiritual contribution to countries and peoples of all over the world.嗯，结尾还不错。

希望没有打击到你^_^，语言和一些细小的语法错误注意一下，另外，最重要的是论证要清楚，到位，无关的话不说，有关的话一定要说清楚。

chenguang104UID: 125198

thanks for "the Little Tortorse"correction in details!