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谢谢，改得很好！
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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:
In order to make ourselves happy, we should learn how to make others happy first


In my opinion, to solve this problem, we should clearly define the concept of happiness. In fact, the happiness is a sense that someone feels and shocks by the outside world and makes him or her happy. So it is obvious that to make others happy first and we will gain the happiness at the same time.

It is not a simple thing to make others happy, which is associated with the attitude of world from you. Say, you care about the world, care about the people in the world, and you want to live and work well with them. In a word, you hope you can do something for them. And you have a positive attitude about the world. In this case, you will tend to make others happy and enjoy yourself in the process, which means you become happy as well. However, if you only care about yourself, care about how to make yourself happy, then it is a hard time to get along well with others, let alone make others happy. And the result must be totally different from the former one.

In fact, it is a interesting thing to make others happy, you can really enjoy the process and learn a lot. For example, there is a kid who is keeping on crying, and you know, it is noise. While what can you do to make him happy? Firstly, we can observe him and find out the reason for his crying, meanwhile, we can put something ahead of him and see what can attract him. Then, we can use the actual thing to distract him from what make him upset, and do some actions to make him happy. At last, we will find that we can are influenced by him when he is laughing that lively.

The last one but not the least, we also can learn more about the world in the process of making others happy. There are different problems for different people with different experiences. So it is hard for us to make the people who have different experience from us open their heart and laugh. However, this is the difficult let us learn more about the society, and have a different friendship with the person who has been helped by us.

To make others happy first, then you can be happy in the process. I believe it, and I think you will believe it if you actually do something to make others happy.

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竹叶结 发表于 2012-6-11 09:29
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:
In order to make ourselves happy, we should  ...

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秋雨荆州 发表于 2012-6-11 09:54

谢谢！  改得很好啊！

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:
The best way for parents to teach their children about responsibility is to have them care for animals.


I don’t think it will be good for children to learn the responsibility in a way of adopting animals. Because the human society is the place we cultivate our responsibility and use it to keep a well relationship with other people, which is totally different with caring animals. I support my view as followings.

Firstly, responsibility is a thing between human and human rather between different species. So even though it can make some difference to care for animals for children, it can’t be directly used in the human society. Take cat for instance, we just feed the cat at right time and keep it free. But there is more complex in the human society, you need talk, play, go shopping, and go to bed with your friends. In this case, it is too easy to really have a responsibility.

What’s more, you may be bothered by something and feel unhappy sometimes, and it is very easy for you argue with your friends or other people if there are some divergences of you. And it is difficult for you to deal with that situation, often both of you will have a bad mode at last. However, either you or your friends should do something to recover your relationship later. But it is never happened between you and animals since your pets would not be always angry with you if you did something bad to them, intentionally or accidentally.

Finally, the responsibility is more than caring about someone or animals. We are responsible for what we did and what we said. For example, I promise you I will lend you some money, and it is an irresponsible thing for me if I can’t keep my words. In addition, if I am a leader of a team, then I should represent this team and take responsibility for the conducts of it. Both of these things are about responsibility, but they are not related to caring someone.

In conclusion, I don’t think it is the best way to care for animals to develop the responsibility of children. Parents ought to take the environment into consideration and make a wise decision for their children. Sports such as soccer, basketball and in forth could be good ways to train the children’s responsibility effectively.

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I don’t think it will be good for children to learn the responsibility in a way of adopting animals. Because the human society is the place we cultivate our responsibility and use it to keep a well relationship with other people, which is totally different with caring animals. I support my view as followings.; H4 A& c& @) b2 ^

+ q7 B* E2 H% H# j, W0 \3 cFirstly, responsibility is a thing between human and human rather （than）between different species. So even though it can make some difference to care for animals for children, it can’t be directly used in the human society. Take cat（the cat） for instance, we just feed the cat at right time and keep it free. But there is more complex in the human society, you need talk, play, go shopping, and go to bed with your friends. In this case, it is too easy to really have a responsibility.
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What’s more, you may be bothered by something and feel unhappy sometimes, and it is very easy for you argue with your friends or other people if there are some divergences of you. And it is difficult for you to deal with that situation, often both of you will have a bad mode(mood) at last. However, either you or your friends should do something to recover your relationship later. But it is never happened (happen不用被动吧)between you and animals since your pets would not be always angry with you if you did something bad to them, intentionally or accidentally.
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Finally, the responsibility is more than caring about someone or animals. We are responsible for what we did and what we said. For example, I promise you I will lend you some money, and it is an irresponsible thing for me if I can’t keep my words. In addition, if I am a leader of a team, then I should represent this team and take responsibility for the conducts of it. Both of these things are about responsibility, but they are not related to caring someone.1 r/ ~; t5 U, R; \- e/ `

3 |8 _. @0 s+ |3 U# ]In conclusion, I don’t think it is the best way to care for animals to develop the responsibility of children. Parents ought to take the environment into consideration and make a wise decision for their children. Sports such as soccer, basketball and in forth could be good ways to train the children’s responsibility effectively.
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楼主写的真棒啊！！够profound!

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some jobs can pay high salaries but require employees to leave their family and friends. some jobs pay few salaries but allow employees staying with family and friend. which job do you prefer? why?


In my view, the job with high salaries but the workplace is far from my family would be my choice. Because I need to improve myself in a different environment and have to earn much money to make a life after I graduate from school, low payment and close to my hometown will reduce my passion.

First of all, I can learn more things during the process such as touching different cultures, making more friends and experiencing more challenges if the workplace is far from my family. Take my own experience for example, my hometown is Quanzhou, Fujian province in China, whereas my college school is located at Qindao which is a big city in Shandong province in China and is far from Quanzhou. As we know, there are a large gap of the culture and custom between these two regions. I felt quite sick at the first two years when I came to Qindao, I wasn’t used to understanding the language people speaking in here. So it takes two years for me to get into this environment and feel good by myself. On the other hand, I get a lot and know myself better. So I don’t regret my choice to study in Qindao.

Secondly, in additional to improving the experience for a student who is going to step into the society, the money is very important to cultivate myself better. There is an old saying, “Money is not the most valuable thing, but without money you can do nothing.” To have a progressing future, I need do a lot and it will cost large quantity of money. For example, I want to travel to have a profound knowledge about this country and learn some skills from specialists, and I want to make a big deal which always needs a lot of money to take into action. So the high salaries are very necessary for me.

Finally, I will lose the passion to further improve myself if I work next to my family. Because we are used to depend on our parents and don’t think much about our future, let along challenging ourselves to come over some tough experience. So it isn’t good for you to be independence and make a life by yourselves.

For the reasons shown above, I insist my opinion about having a job far from my family with high salaries.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: the car has had greater effect to society than the airplane has to.


There are various kinds of car in the streets, especially at night, we can see the beautiful view in the street like a lively picture. Someone might argue that the effect of airplane make a big difference on the life of people nowadays. But I think the function of car is much larger than that airplane have worked. The reasons are shown in the following.

At the first place, car is something more available for general people due to its price, and it is possible for us to own a car, but it is an anther story for an airplane. Because of the dramatic pressure and living pace, many people tend to relax themselves to a peace place where are often located far from downtown, so car is undoubted to be the most convenient transportation tool and get the destination for general people. However, airplane just is one kind of transportation which can help you when you are busy with your business, it cann’t make you enjoy yourselves in the process and have a good time with a happy mood.

What’s more, car is something like a friend could make you feel good. Because of the special meaning of Spring Festival for Chinese people, they have a custom to go back home to get together with their family no matter how far they live or work from their home. But the ticket of airplane is so high that most of them can’t afford it. Hence, many drive their car across provinces sometimes for several days to set off their trip to go home. So the car just likes a friend of them; it stands for their foot, stands for their house. The relationship between car and human is more than a tool and its user.

Finally, the importance of one invent is depended the effect it has made rather than considering the technological level it has contained. The number of the car owner is so large that car seems to be a necessity for every family, to be a significant contrary, there are only few people can buy airplane as their personal transportation. So the effect car have made are much greater than that of airplane.

For the reasons I have stated above, I hold the opinion that car is much more valuable than airplane.