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独立:Colleges or universities should offer more courses to prepare students for the future before they#
start working. Agree or disagree?



Nowadays, job market is so fierce, in order to make students get a good job, should colleges or universities supply more courses with students before they start working? As far as I am concerned, I tend to agree with this satement that these education institutions should offer more courses to students in order to increase their job rate.

First of all, studying more courses can make students learn more knowledge, which is benefit to get a good job. When you hunt job, the students who have more knowledge is easily emplyed than
those who have less knowledge. And more knowledge can make students confident when they are interviewed. For example, if I know more knowledge about this field or related with this field, I will be more confident and wanna to answer the question actively and express my idea eagerly. Also, rich knowledge can broden students herizon, which make them learn to enjoy more beauties and more funnies in their life.


Secondly, offering more courses can culture student more interests so that they have a good plan for their caree. An old saying said that interest is a good techer. Without interest, without motivation, without successs. So students can find their more interests by learning more courses in many fields, they can choose the field they favorated to work, in this case, even if they meet some difficulties, they can try to solve it positively, don’t feel tried for their work. For instance, I like doing what I like, If I like doing it or courious about it, I will bury myself in it and find it is really a enjoyment for me, of course, sometimes it is arduous, but you are satisfied and happy after overcoming difficulty. as a result, eveything goes well and I can do it best.

On the other hand, although more courses can benefits students a lot, it is not the more the better, without any limitation, it should be suitable for students. Otherwise, excessive courses will creat some adverse action, such as more courses make students are tired of learning or they feel blandless about their future, they don’t know how to choose rightly for their caree in the future. I think colleges can induct student or offer some certain courses selectively.

To sum up, as the reason stated as above, in my point of view, I think it is a good way for students to get a good job that colleges or universities should properly offer more courses to prepare students for the future before they starting work. Because opportunities are always given by those who prepare well.
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6.4作文已改,请把我的改了传上来,谢谢
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