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It is better to relaxby a movie or reading a book than doing physical exercise, agree or disagree.

Nowadays, stressful work atmosphere lead people to bothphysical and mental unhealthy. To prevent that, a good way to relax oneself isnow becoming a new ‘medicine’. As my point of view, physical exercise can workmore efficiently than reading a book or watching a movie.
First of all, the most important reason I stand is a properphysical exercise outside may avoid physical disease. For office people whospend most of the day in their office, staring at their computer, they may haveone or more of the occupational diseases, such as mouse hand, or tech neck. Bydoing specific physical exercise, such as exercising the neck or stretching, officepeople may feel less stress on their body. If they read a book or watch a movieat home, it may even bring them a heavier burden on their health situation.
Secondly, physical exercise can also bring mental health to workpeople or students. A recent research points out that lack of physical exercisemay lead people to mental unhealthy by accumulating all the mental stress anddissatisfaction from work or study. After studying for whole day, students maywant to breathe a bit of fresh air, and enjoy the nature. Here jogging ortaking a slow work outside along the street can be a good option. A properphysical exercise brings them peace and satisfaction.
At last, physical exercise may bring you more friends. Byjoining sports clubs, or going to gym, you can enlarge your friends group withthose people facing same situations or having same interests as you do. You mayalso reach the hot spot by doing some unique sports, as an example, extremegame Parkour is taking a new fashion lead. Those advantages can’t be obtainedby reading or watching a movie alone by yourself.
A great philosopher says, ‘Life lies in sports.’ Dailyexercise will bring you more than a relaxing and enjoyable life.

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6/5 作业
When a new technological devices become available. Some people buy it right away, while others will wait until many have acquired it. Which view do you agree with and explain why.

Electronic devices and technological devices are becoming new fashion spot for both young people and old seniors. Every time when new technological devices are been publishing, such as Apple products, people are looking forward to purchasing one. Some people are waiting in endless queues in front of the store to get the first serve immediately, while others are sensibly waiting until many have acquired it. Personally, I prefer the second customer group as the reasons following.
At first place, the reason why technological devices are popular nowadays is its convenience application and entertainment functions. However, those attractive features are not as essential as living product so that customers have no need to purchase them right away. Sometimes, new devices are facing their low-quality problems. Considering of the quality as a key factor when consumers make their decisions, more sensible consumer will wait until other customers testing the quality of the new device and purchase what they really need.
Secondly, following the fashion blindly is not a smart move for most of the consumers whose budget for technological device is limited. As recent research shows that many customers who chase after trends tend to purchase what they don’t really need blindly by reading or watching advertisement from newspaper or TV. Sometimes, peer pressure can also be a key factor for those consumers to buy those unnecessary electronic devices. If the new devices aren’t what you really want, the money you paid is not worth the value.
At last, some retail outlets sell the new devices as a sale promotion which may cause a consumer stampede. There is more than one case indicates such sale activities cause traffic congestion, bodily harm, and disorderly conduct. For the point of personal health care, standing in the queues for more than forty hours in a cold winter night may also cause serious diseases. Thus, purchasing those devices later in the store prevents the consumers from those wild rushes and unnecessary injury.
Overall, customers should keep a clear and calm mind when they face the rush. They will gain more than what they want after other consumers have acquired the new devices. Anticipating worth its own value.

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Agree or disagree with the following statement? One of the ways that parents can help children be ready for adult life is to ask them to do a part-time job. Provide specific reasons and examples.

Asked why parents will let their children do a part-time job, there is a boilerplate answer: the great contribution of a proper part-time job is to prepare their children for their future adult life. Personally, I totally agree with those parents as the following reasons.
The first point I want to put forward is that a part-time job help children be ready for their career life. Children can pick a career-related part-time job as their first choice to see whether they are into that job or not. By getting familiar to the job process, and understanding how the work is been done, children will catch a first expression about what they will do as a living for a long time in the future. So they can decide whether they would like to do this job or give another try to other job. As adults, there are many restrict to change a job, at least switching to a totally new field is considered as difficult and unacceptable. So a part-time job is definitely a great opportunity for children to make a first move or take a first taste of their adult career life.
Another equally significant reason is that the part-time job enlarges your social group with more friends or even professional workers who have same interest as you do, or more experience than you do. Social network in adults’ life must be as critical as their professional skills, so knowing some friends other than few family or school friends is a chance to sharpen your weapon in a true adult battle. Here comes an example, training engineers are required to know practical knowledge on the work sites. If the engineers had on-site part-time jobs in high school and asked abundant questions to the real engineers, this unique experience and veritable knowledge may decide if they get the job or project.
As the last point, living in a society is a totally different story than school life. Children may have hard time to defend their own right or turn down other people’s unreasonable demands. These are life lessons and philosophy that can only be learnt in society by blending into the real atmosphere. However, a serious job may scare the children because its restrict requirement and complicated relationships; that’s why getting a part-time job is the best solution for both problems. Children who had a part-time job knew how to deal with subtle relationship issues and balance between their work loads and break time, because they would have to balance the time between class and part-time job during school years.
In sum, getting a part-time job is a great prepare for career acknowledge, social network establishment and adult society living skills. That’s why parents are always thinking ahead of their children and save for the rain coming.

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Movies and television programs should present stories that good people being awarded and bad people being punished.

When watching movies and television become a popular way for people to entertain, all the eyes turn to which sort of stories should be presented through those public media. I agree that movies and television programs should present stories that good people being awarded and bad people being punished to motivate right behavior in the whole society and establish a right moral view for young children.
The first point is this sort of stories will raise ethical awareness of whole society. The stories will be veritable examples to encourage good people continuing their righteous behavior and scare bad people to stop from their adverse business. The whole society will be improved in both ways. Police detective dramas are the ubiquitous examples by telling a series of stories that police take hard efforts to catch the brutal killer at last. Those exciting story plot not only attract lots of audience, it also teaches them an important lesson that righteousness is always defended by good people and bad people will deserve what they have to. By broadcasting this idea through public media, more people will follow to do right behaviors so that the society atmosphere will be safer and more peaceful.
Telling this sort of stories also establish a moral view for young children. Children are a group easily being misled or follow the wrong path since they are too young and too naïve. If the idea that good people being awarded while bad people being punished is propagated among children, they will follow the right idea and pass up the wrong one. Nowadays, cartoons or anime creates many superheroes, such as Avenger series, Spiderman and Batman, using their super power to save the world and beat up the bad guys. These popular stories with advanced technology draw many teenagers’ attention; by the same time, give them a lecture that only righteous will last.
In the complicated society, righteous will help people being good; that is why we should encourage television programs and movies presenting more stories with this theme.

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