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kchszy061banUID: 3010708

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People can take care of their family members better when they livein big cities than in the countryside.

As the cities becomes more densely populated,more and more people want to live in the countryside areas of the city.The main reasons may be the less polutions and safer surroundings.However,being far away from the big cities also can lead several problems,such as inconveinent,
live only with your family but not your relatives,and less available of different resources.Therefore,I believe that live in big cities can make people take care of their family members better.

The main problem to live in the countryside is that it would take you long time to go to work places,because you are far away from the downtown areas of the cities.Countryside is always miles away from the cities,you can dirve or take public transportation to go to work,all of these methods need more time than people who live in the cities spend on their way to work.For example,if you lived in the countryside,you need to get up at six thirty,and then you prepare for the breakfast for your family,it will take you thirty minutes or more,then you eat your meal.After breakfast,you have to send you children to school,and then go to work.When you arrive at your company,it is always one minute before you will late.Things even go worse when there are heavy rain,snow,or on a windy day,drive to the cities become difficult,and it also take you longer time to go to work.If you are in traped in a traffic jam,you will be late for work.

Then,people are tend to live with his/her relatives like grand parents or parents,not only with their children,live in countryside means you may live away with your relatives.Relatatives are always willing to help each other when one of them have some problems,through this kind of help,relatives can improve their relationships and when they themselves have some difficulties,other relatives will help them.However,when people live in countryside alone without relativs,the chances to contact with their relatives decreased.And when they have some questions,like they want their parents to look after their children for one day,things may be complex,the reason is that their parents need to drive a long way to get their children’ home.

Also,the countryside is far from the big cities,there are not so many supermarkers,shops,hospotals,schools and so forth.When people who live in countryside want to buy something which can not find nearby,they need to go to the downtown areas to find what they want to buy.
One of the serious situation is that if one of their family members have get some acute diseases,the amblances have to spend so much time
one the way,which means that your family member suffers extra pain.And if people live in the big cities,the amblances can arrive at their home quickly to treat the patient.

In conclusion,I think if people want to take care of their family member better,it is a more reasonable choice to live in the big cities than live in the countryside.

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kchszy061banUID: 3010708

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