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[作文] 【Daily Writing作文特训小组】by 原味冰山 作业贴 [复制链接]

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发表于 2012-6-12 17:26:17 |显示全部楼层
第一次交作业。请多多关照呐!!:lol。。。

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发表于 2012-6-12 17:27:19 |显示全部楼层
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   What kind of job do you think is better for you? Some

people think that work should be work long hours for

three days a week .It is a exaggeration to say that

work five days a week is waste time ,or even it is ,it

just happens to those work efficient are very low. As

for me ,I prefer the five days in a week.the reasons as

follows.
   To begin with, working five days in a week is better

for our work efficient, because we working shorter

time could enable the better efficient. Working a

shorter time allows people to relax themselves every

day. It means that people can develop their energy

and passion to engaged in work. On the other hand

,keep working in a long time brings to over-loaded

work could devastate people. Occasionally rest is

better for us to summarize the work we have already

done, and set an adjusts plan for the future.
   Further, people who work five days in a week would

have more opportunities in their company.

Considering that leaders often required

communicating with subordinates. So the people who

are always away their positions could have few

opportunities  to get promotion .The personnel might

tend to choose a five-day worker to be their manager
    In the end , I believe that three days with long work

place a wealth of stress on people. That is to say , this

kind of work method have negative effect on our

health body condition. A tight schedule that it is too

tight could be more or less harmful to our health. In

fact, our body is the reserved capital for hard work of

the next phase.
   At one time, people thinks that work a long time in

a few days it is the best choice .But now, it seems that

five days with shorter hours is not only good for hours

health, but also work efficient.

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发表于 2012-6-12 17:28:47 |显示全部楼层
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  In the reading passage, the professor presents three measures have been proposed to stop the spread of cane toad in Australia.  However, in the lecture ,the professor contents the casts doubt on the reading passage in the following three points.
First of all, the reading passage contents that the national fence can prevent the spread of animals which had a harmful impact on Australia. However, the professor in the lecture disagree with the writer. He says that fence would not prevent the flow of streams .It would let young toads or toad eggs though.
  Moreover ,contrary to the belief in the passage that the toads could be captured by volunteers ,the professor asserts that volunteers might kill members of cane toads and native frogs. This directly contradicts what the passage indicates.
  Finally, the reading passage attribute to developing a disease-causing virus to control the cane toad populations. On the contrary ,the professor point out that the virus could be transmitted through animal transportation have negative effect on the ecosystem. this is entirely opposed to the writer's expectation.

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发表于 2012-6-12 17:39:46 |显示全部楼层
秋雨荆州 发表于 2012-6-12 17:31
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嘿嘿。。。一定加油

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原味冰山 发表于 2012-6-12 17:27
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原味冰山 发表于 2012-6-12 17:39
嘿嘿。。。一定加油

顶一下,好久没出现了?

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