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发表于 2012-6-14 19:02:23 |显示全部楼层
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大家好,我是菜鸟,文章写得很菜,求狠批!
6.14号作业独立写作
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Recently, we have so many sources of news and information, so that we can not tell which one is the real one or who is telling the truth.

Nowadays, with the developing of the society, people could get news and information from newspaper, broadcast and internet easily, and these sources of news and information have become more and more. However, sometimes, the same incidences reported by different news institutions are different. So some people argue that we can’t tell which one is the real one or who is telling the truth. Personally, I quite agree with the arguer.
  At the first place, there are much more sources of news and information in our modern society than that ever before, such as newspaper, broadcast, TV set and Internet. Therefore, most of these institutions face dramatically competition with others. If they want to win the competition, they must attract more customers. However, in modern society, most people like to read some interesting or alluring news. Therefore, in order to make their news and information more interesting and fascinating, so many companies decided to exaggerate the facts or change them. In this case, as a common reader, we can’t judge which one is accurate and which one is wrong.
  At the second place, generally speaking, almost every news company represents various classes. For example, the national news and information company always consider the profit of the government, whereas companies established by businessmen, admittedly, regard that the profits of these businessmen are the most important. In this case, even if reporting the same thing, different companies have different views. For example, when the national company and individual news company report a novel commercial law which is beneficial to the government, but harm to businessman, they would inevitably analysis this issue from various aspects. What’s more, the news and information institutions from different country are also view thing from different aspects because of their various cultures and traditions.
  However, in my view, this phenomenon is not a good one. If a news company always report something which is quite different with the fact, the public would never read its news, then the company would face bankrupt. Reporting news accord to the fact is the basic responsibility for every interviewer and news company.
  In a word, as the number of press companies become more and more, the competition among them become more and more dramatic. In order to win competitions with other companies, most companies always tell lies. However, I quite disagree with this incorrect method, which would confuse the public. The public have the right to know the fact and telling the public the facts is the responsibility for every journalists.   

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发表于 2012-6-15 00:01:00 |显示全部楼层
标记一下,明天来改~

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发表于 2012-6-15 11:25:09 |显示全部楼层
lz写的不错,加油哈!

大家好 revised by liang0603.doc

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乔布斯:“记住你即将死去”。

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发表于 2012-6-15 17:14:56 |显示全部楼层
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发表于 2012-6-15 18:27:01 |显示全部楼层
继续加油!

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发表于 2012-6-19 01:43:09 |显示全部楼层
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发表于 2012-6-19 14:43:30 |显示全部楼层
作文已改。请过目。
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发表于 2012-6-20 10:05:25 |显示全部楼层
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发表于 2012-6-20 10:18:48 |显示全部楼层
加油!

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