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97.The following appeared in an e-mail sent by the marketing director of the Classical Shakespeare Theatre of Bardville.
"Over the past ten years, there has been a 20 percent decline in the size of the average audience at Classical Shakespeare Theatre productions. In spite of increased advertising, we are attracting fewer and fewer people to our shows, causing our profits to decrease significantly. We must take action to attract new audience members. The best way to do so is by instituting a 'Shakespeare in the Park' program this summer. Two years ago the nearby Avon Repertory Company started a 'Free Plays in the Park' program, and its profits have increased 10 percent since then. If we start a 'Shakespeare in the Park' program, we can predict that our profits will increase, too."
Write a response in which you discuss what questions would need to be answered in order to decide whether the recommendation is likely to have the predicted result. Be sure to explain how the answers to these questions would help to evaluate the recommendation.
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同样的program肯能对Avon有用但对Shakespeare是没用的，比较两家剧院情况不同且那都是两年前的事了~。
有可能Avon还用了其他手段来吸引观众。
观众减少的具体原因不明确，可能是剧院内部设施老化啊等等，那么启用这个program并不会有多大作用。

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多谢指点~

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dennis_szsy 发表于 2012-7-2 21:36
同样的program肯能对Avon有用但对Shakespeare是没用的，比较两家剧院情况不同且那都是两年前的事了~。
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多谢指点~

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i have found three flaws:1.no evidence to show the decrease in profit is mostly caused by the decline of audience.maybe the cost is increasing sharply during the past ten years.
2 whether the increase of ARC' profits is caused by the park program need to be investigated
3.the park program may be not as attractive as is was 2 years ago.people may be tired of such program.
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meadow2013 发表于 2012-7-4 10:42
i have found three flaws:1.no evidence to show the decrease in profit is mostly caused by the declin ...

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