【daily writing】oyyy’s

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改好了~多交流

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ZoeX 发表于 2012-8-1 18:34
It's believed that honesty is one of the most essential characters in modern world which is full of  ...

谢谢修改哇，实验不是真的，找不到例子的时候我总爱乱编实验数据><

melaniewUID: 3345865

:)

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melaniew 发表于 2012-8-2 20:12

谢谢修改，改得很好很仔细，好多句子被你一改变得好顺~:$

关于scenario的用法，我是那天早上在看学术文献的时候看到的，特地去查了一下朗文，指的是a situation that could possibly happen。在文献里表达的意思也是在某种情况下。

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已改，请过目、
另外对tutor概念的理解，感觉楼主可能理解为british university or college 的辅导员了，在美式环境下，我们是不是还应该理解其为家庭教师之类的私人教师呢？多交流

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不好意思，改晚了，请过目哈：D

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smsun823 发表于 2012-8-4 20:37
已改，请过目、
另外对tutor概念的理解，感觉楼主可能理解为british university or college 的辅导员了，在 ...

嗯嗯我也发现我们的理解不同，但是美国对于助教类似的职务也是称为tutor诶

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smsun823 发表于 2012-8-4 20:37
已改，请过目、
另外对tutor概念的理解，感觉楼主可能理解为british university or college 的辅导员了，在 ...

对了，另外关于我作文里那个课程，是类似污水处理厂设计的，名字叫水处理工程，作文写的时间比较赶，想反正举了例子就没好好翻><，不好意思啊

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0807--By makeithappen

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8.9已改，楼主过目

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不好意思。。。有点晚

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本来还想加好友  发现权限不够:L  

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With the development of the economics andsociety, education becomes a more and more important issue. Nowadays peoplebring up a heated discussion about the comparison of the likely to be educatedbefore and today. Some of them alleged that individuals in the past focusedmuch more on study than today's, due to less recreation utilities. Consideringthe following reasons in nowadays -- complete education systems, rich methodstoward knowledge and the increasing attention paid to education, however, myview point is on the opposite side.

First and foremost, there has been no timein history during which the education were more developed than today. Aresearch done by Education department in University of South California couldadd weight to my statement. It's reported that more than 43.8% of countriesover worlds (world) have basic educationpolicies including elementary school and middle school, for developedcountries, the percents is more than 98.9%, which is incredible(incredibly) high. Given the past, governments werepoor and had no ideas about the essential status of knowledge, there was nopublic educational organization. Expect wealth people, others still struggledwith making a living, let alone being educated. Thus, the complete educationsystems nowadays provide chances for us to become educated.

Another reason involves the various ways toacquired knowledge owing to the development of technology. As we all know,laptops, tablets are become more and more popular nowadays, which could countas portable learning tools during our daily life. Take my experience as asubstantial example. I bring my ipad to class every day. When teacher refers tosome new concept that I haven't heard, I could use ipad to seek for the properdefinition and explanation. And through the help of today's technology, I couldunderstand much faster and thorough during the class. Let alone 50 years along,even it was 10 years ago, I couldn't image that I could use the tools by handto acquire information so readily. Hence, the fantastic electrics tools andinternet could help us learn much more convenient and easier.
（education 的新角度，不错）

The last but no the least（the last but no the least记得这个老师说最好不用）, the strong studying willingtoday among peers also inspires individuals, which stimulates them concentrated（concentrating）to study along with makes learning easier.People are aware of the importance of education through millennia of events andfacts by the means of various media nowadays. Knowledge is a crucial tool inalmost every aspects of life, only equipped with knowledge could lead tosuccess and leisure life, while which is something that for the most part weignored before. As a result, the increase of the awareness of the education'simportance makes it easier to acquire knowledge today.

In a nutshell, according to the 3 reasonsmentioned above, considering the 3 characteristics of society at present--- thedeveloped education system, millennia of ways to acquire knowledge and theawareness of the importance of education, I still insist my opinion that peopleare now easier to become educated than in the past.

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我把改好的文档搞丢了。。。

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已改，cheer up~~