【SAT每日一题】7/25/12 Writing > Improving Sentences

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Part or all of the following sentence is underlined; beneath the sentence are five ways of phrasing the underlined material. Select the option that produces the best sentence. If you think the original phrasing produces a better sentence than any of the alternatives, select choice A.  
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+ F& w( A$ }' L2 {" EMahpiua Luta, better known for being Red Cloud, was chief of the Oglala Sioux during the 1860s.

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A. for being
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2 M+ }+ Y- L9 P( @$ @2 YB. that he was

C. as being

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E. as
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4 L! S2 y. ?. U- u正确答案:E

解析:
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, q7 Q  e: P- TChoice (E) is correct. It avoids the error of the original by using an appropriate idiom, “known as,” to introduce “Red Cloud,” the more familiar name of “Mahpiua Luta.”




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