【独立写作】唐啊啊的作业帖

唐啊啊UID: 3209551

8.2
2010-10-17 独立
In the lecture, the professor is skeptical about the idea of the reading passage that the microcredit helps the poor starting business and getting rid of poverty by providing them with small loans. The professor hold the idea argues that investing money to the poor cannot effectively take poverty away.

In the reading passage, the businesses created by the borrowers will lead both individuals and countries out of poverty. On the contrary, the professor says that the businesses cannot improve their lives significantly, because the businesses they run always small and cannot bring a large profit, what’s more, some borrowers spend the money on food to survive.

The professor then opposes reading’s idea that the program loans women most by stating that though women get microloans, their family members take advantage of these benefits, women are forced by their husbands and have to burden loans by themselves.

Finally, the professor disproves the reading’s idea that microloans can reduce the disparity between the rich and the poor. The professor points out that microloan cannot bring equality as they work in poor countries only, but do not deal with poverty in rich ones.

学会用反驳词：argue, oppose, disprove, on the contrary.

唐啊啊UID: 3209551

今天摘抄了一篇独立作文，终于跨出第一步了。我自己能够想到点子，就是不会把点子展开写，呵呵，加油哦，明天一篇独立一篇综合。

唐啊啊UID: 3209551

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: people should take time to relax with hobbies or physical activities that are very different what they do at work.
In order to relive from daily work, each individual has their own method to relax. In my opinion, hobbies and physical activities that are different from their work can help people release themselves better and more easily, also, these exercises play a vital and elemental role in people’s health and mental development. So I totally agree with the statement above.
Firstly, Hobbies and physical activities that have nothing to do with daily work can reduce stress and produce feelings of happiness. This may arise from running, swimming, hiking and playing games and so on. For example, some individuals with great pressure from their work need to take physical activities or do something they are interested in. Playing games is one of the most popular forms of entertainment, hiking strengthens their bodies and makes them foster a sense of adventure. Therefore, these kinds of activities reduce their tension and thus contribute towards a health and satisfying life.
Secondly, the amount of exercises or hobbies people undertake can ensure the quality of night’s sleep. For example, a person who likes reading science fiction before sleep will be unaware of the pressure from work when he/she is indulged in it. Whereas, some activities that related to his/her work will probably remind him/her something, such as the task need to be accomplished tomorrow, the deadline of the report and so on, these kinds of things will definitely cause a sense of tension and make him/her feel anxious before sleep. In fact, without worried about their works or competitions, people are able to rest well. A sound sleep is vital to people’s health because it is the time when both mind and body should rest. Waking up the following morning, bright-eyed and ready for the day will prove the importance of good rest.
In summary, taking time to relax with physical activities and hobbies induces both physical satisfaction and positive psychological effects. In my opinion, these two effects highlight the importance of exercises and hobbies in order to relax and lead a healthy lifestyle. For these reasons, it is clear to me that taking exercises and hobbies that are different from what they do during work time is a good method to relax our bodies and minds.

唐啊啊UID: 3209551

8.3
2010.2.7
In the lecture, the professor is skeptical about the idea of the reading passage that taking too much folic acid would be dangerous for health by stating that the point in the reading passage is unconvincing.

In the reading passage, it is dangerous that adding the same amount of vitamin that 15% people take sufficiently to bread is dangerous. On the contrary, the professor argues that not anyone needs the same amount of vitamin, youth and pregnant women need more vitamins to meet their needs and adding vitamin to bread is the only way to breed the child.

The professor then opposes the reading passage’s idea that elder people should be cautious about eating folic acid to avoid adverse effect by pointing out that elderly people also need enough folic acid to keep body work and to prevent other diseases.

Finally, the professor disproves the reading’s idea that people take folic acid by their own judgments. The professor says that adding folic acid as to vitamin supplements can’t solve the problem for the reasons that people may not follow the suggestion to take the supplement or they would take folic acid late, to solve these problems, the most efficient way is to add folic acid into the regular things, like bread.
感觉听得不是很好，也没有怎么改，先贴上来了，单词，还是单词，我要去背了

唐啊啊UID: 3209551

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement. People who cannot accept the criticism from others will not be successful at working in a group.

With the ever-accelerated pace of competition in modern society, in order to be successful in working in a group, people need to work with others, holding the same goal, facing the similar difficulties and exchange ideas with teammates. So, when speaking about whether refusing other’s criticism may lead a failure, I strongly agree with the idea.

First of all, if people are willing to accept other people’s criticism, it means that they are capable to face their weaknesses and make changes on them, these actions help them in improving work efficiency and planting a seed for success in the future. Take myself for example, I made a lot of mistakes in writing a simple computer programs at the most beginning of learning program. My officemates often laugh at my messy codes, but they also gave me lots of methods about my program. I thought their suggestions over and over, carried tests and finally applied them into my program, by doing so, my simple program had good performance. What’s more, this helps me succeed in writing a more complicate program now.  

Furthermore, the normal form of working pattern is cooperation in the same project. To survive in the fierce social competition, it is barely for a person attaining his goal without other coworkers' assistance. Take a department co-worker for example, with the support of his staff and he gets the opportunity to be successful in a project, and such phenomena are pervasive around t the entire city, people who are capable of receiving criticism will benefit tremendously.

Moreover, people who don’t accept opinions from others would probably be isolated by their teammates. For example, a team member who does not allow his plan to be revised would not be acceptable by other co-workers, therefore, it becomes impossible for them to achieve the same goal, so what other team members will do is to separate him. If one gets abandoned by his or her cooperators, it is equal that he or she goes astray form the routes to success.

In a nutshell, it is important for people working in cooperation be able to accept criticism, it is a way to achieve success.

唐啊啊UID: 3209551

上次写过一次了，别人帮忙改了我就再写一次。以后也都这样
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: people should take time to relax with hobbies or physical activities that are very different what they do at work.

With the ever-accelerated pace of modern society, people’s way of living had been dramatically changed. Unlike our ancestors, who settled in the same region and lived in a way of changelessness. Contemporary people suffer a lot from their daily work, so they need to make kinds of friends and do some exercises to have some fun. Therefore, when speaking whether hobbies and physical activities that are different from what people do at work is important for them to relax, I strongly advocate such an idea.

First of all, physical activities and hobbies that totally different from people’s work can help them relieve from daily stress better. Nowadays, many people suffer from overloaded work. Taking activities like running, swimming and hiking are good ways for them to relax, thus contribute towards both their physical and mental health. Take myself for example, in my spare time, I practice yoga regularly. I enjoy it so much. The soft music, the body stretches can slowly take away my daily stress, I always feel refreshed after the yoga class and have greater efficiency in my work.

Furthermore, people who have their own hobbies can make friends from different fields. It is a wonderful thing for people with the same hobby to entertain together. They play with the same interests、discuss things from different aspects and share emotions with each other. Besides, these activities can widen their horizons and probably can stimulate inspirations of their daily work.

Moreover, participating in physical activities or other hobbies can ensure one sound sleep at night. For example, a person who likes reading science fictions before sleep will be unaware of the pressure from work when he/she is indulged in it. Whereas, some activities that are related to daily work will probably remind him/her something, such as the task need to be accomplished tomorrow, the deadline of the report and so on, these kinds of things will definitely cause a sense of tension and make him/her feel anxious before sleep. In fact, without worried about their works or competitions, people are able to rest well. A sound sleep is vital to both people’s health and a good working state next day.

In a nutshell, these kinds of activities not only help reduce their tension but also contribute towards a health and satisfying life. Therefore, it is of great importance for people to take hobbies and physical exercises that are different form their work to relieve from pressure.

唐啊啊UID: 3209551

8.16 独立.doc (30.5 KB, 下载次数: 4)

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已改，楼主过目，加油~~

唐啊啊UID: 3209551

zZ-IT 发表于 2012-8-17 14:47
已改，楼主过目，加油~~

呵呵，谢谢，受益

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what is happing around the world？.doc (31.5 KB, 下载次数: 2)

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8.17独立作文 by 唐啊啊，请指正

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唐啊啊 发表于 2012-8-17 20:11
8.17独立作文 by 唐啊啊，请指正

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你比我写的好很多，尤其是条理性比我好很多。
但是我感觉就是单词用的太简单了，基本英语4级词汇，如果用高级点的词汇，我觉得就完美了。

wuxiang0220UID: 3354608

已改，不好意思，晚了