急急！求助！推荐表格里这样写缺点行吗？请达人帮我修改下吧！

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每个推荐表格都要求写缺点，下面这样写缺点行吗？请大家帮我修改下吧！
One weakness is scientific manuscript writing because of lacking experience. As a Ph.D candidate, writing scientific manuscript might be improved during the course of Ph.D studying. Moreover, As I know she has already pays significant attention to improve her English, I believe her persistence and intelligence can help her overcome this weakness

The weakness might be poor economic conditions. If the school could give her scholarship, that would help her much more not only in study but also in life at U.S

Miss X has excellent writing ability in Chinese. Yet , she is not good at English writing and speaking. As I know she has already pays significant attention to improve her English, I believe her persistence and intelligence can help her overcome this weakness

Miss X is kind of person who has high motivated,  she is able to highly  concentrated on things until completely finished. She can insist on what she is doing but sometimes she lacks whole picture of the project.
第一个缺点和第三个缺点算不算重复呀？第二个算缺点靠谱吗？