issue38

lemonlikeUID: 139588

未限时，485字
写了一遍，自己有修改了一遍，不过还是感觉可说得很少，很生涩

Issue 38 “In the age of television, reading books is not as important as it once was. People can learn as much by watching television as they can by reading books.”

In the age of highly developed technology and communication, many advanced mass media such as television have emerged and been playing a more and more important role in our society and daily life. Many people complained that we can learn so much by watching television that reading books is no longer so important as it ever before. More convenience and information has been brought into our lives by television, however, it can not take the place of reading books at any rate.

Though each has its advantages and disadvantages, television and books are two kinds of completely different mass media, which are not comparable to win over each other. With the television, we can enjoy vivid three-dimensional and continuous video over long distances in almost no time, which rules in carrying live broadcasting, figural tutorial and remote programs; and we can know what has happened and will happen in every hole and corner of the whole world with on need to go out. All of these are the people of hundreds of years ago cannot have imagined. However, when it comes to the field related to abstract ideas and theories, accurate literal descriptions, repetition and comparison, television is not as well competent and efficient as the traditional books. Taking the study of some animals, such as some species of fish, as example, we could learn what they look like and which circumstance they live in, and at the same time listen to the introduction of the background knowledge about their habits, behaviors and so on. Yet when we want to learn much more detailed information about the structure of this species, or its evolution progress, we need to turn to the books finally.

Reading books is an active process, in which we can easily make choice of what and when to read according to our interests and tastes, while television never can provide such convenience. The programs on television are arranged beforehand, and all what the audiences can do is to choose whether watch the programs or not. Moreover, as we know, mass media generally consist of profit-seeking entities, whose chief objective is to maximize profits. Based on this objective, it is justifiable for them to make their programs and reports focus on the issues to cater the public's needs and tastes. So we are not difficultly to find today there are so many useless contents, even rubbish information, congesting in our daily television programs.

With regard to the appealing easygoing nature, television can help a lot in study. It can serve to the role of an introducer, which provides diversified basic knowledge to the beginners without any hostility. When people get familiar with them and develop interest in specific fields, they can read books for further studies. However, it is still impossible for television to take the place of reading books, yet they can cooperate to make it easier and more interesting for people to learn.

木耳UID: 123036

粗看了一下，还不错。
不过：
中规中矩的，没什么大毛病。但也没什么出彩的地方。
这么结尾也可以，不过我觉得总少了什么。最好再写一个。
说不清楚，可还是觉得有些地方写得有些乱。
再写一些其他类别的吧。

有进步，继续努力！

lemonlikeUID: 139588

谢谢木耳啦～～
我的每一篇都不厌其烦给我修改
给我很大的鼓励，我一定要好好努力了
其实你提到的这些问题我在写的过程中都有感觉，可是就是不知道怎么改进
还有一个坏习惯，有的时候拿到难一些的题目就不想写下去了：（

木耳UID: 123036

拿到难一些的题目不会写是正常的，你毕竟才写了几篇。
把每一类里难一些的题目汇总一下，做一个分析，看看到底是什么问题：想不出论点？没有论据？还是语言上不会表述？
然后对症下药

其实除了多思考，多查多找也是非常必要的。网络上什么都有。搬上的精华区也有不少好东西。

提一个建议：以后不要每天都发两篇上来，毕竟大家精力有限。还有，你也要贡献出自己的一份力量哦^_^

lemonlikeUID: 139588

呜呜，要出差了，估计得把作文延期了
不过也好，不像这么临时抱佛脚，多花点时间提高一下写作水平
不过我还是会天天继续写，也争取能给其他网友提点小意见
辛苦木耳大哥了～～