改的好仔细!!谢谢~^^
第三段那个我也觉得我那两句衔接毫无逻辑……,主要是想套问题:要学会先让别人高兴才能让自己高兴。。。所以只好搞了个we may know what makes others happy, but won't feel exactly the same ourselves囧……
不知道怎么能写成逻辑对路又符合题目的
以及这句: I bet the instant reaction for most people is to call a food delivery man, because who does not want to stay in a cozy and warm house and enjoy a total relax.
问题出在我点了个句号……应该是反问的~谁不愿意享受blahblah……所以造成了误解