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发表于 2013-5-26 21:07:02 |只看该作者

It is more important for government to spend money to build art museums and music performance center than to build recreational facilities( such swimming pool, playground)
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发表于 2013-5-26 22:26:00 |只看该作者

Which way do you think is the best for a student to make new friends, a. joining a sports team, b. participate in community activities, c. Traveling
andingmen

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发表于 2013-5-27 13:34:21 |只看该作者

Which way do you think is the best for a student to make new friends, a. join a sports team, b. participate in community activities, c. traveling
诺言哥要早起

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发表于 2013-5-28 10:16:08 |只看该作者

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?People should follow the ambitious dream or people should focus to achieve the realistic goals?
hua_draw

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发表于 2013-5-28 11:12:53 |只看该作者

Nowadays it's easier to maintain health than the past
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发表于 2013-5-28 11:39:06 |只看该作者

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Working at home using computers or telephones is better than working in the office.

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发表于 2013-5-28 23:23:09 |只看该作者

Nowadays it's easier to maintain health than the past。
阿拉阿丁

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发表于 2013-5-31 21:00:23 |只看该作者

GLJESUSJL
综合TPO21

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发表于 2013-5-31 21:10:48 |只看该作者

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同上

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发表于 2013-5-31 22:38:10 |只看该作者

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Young people should try different jobs before they decide which job or career they will do in the long term.
hua_draw

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发表于 2013-6-1 18:46:59 |只看该作者

Young people should try different jobs before they decide which job or career they will do in the long term.
ailin1232

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发表于 2013-6-2 21:39:52 |只看该作者

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Students can get as many benefits from organization or club activities as they can get from their academic studies.
天薇凉

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发表于 2013-6-2 22:23:17 |只看该作者

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? We can learn about a person from the books and movies that person likes.
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发表于 2013-6-3 22:30:12 |只看该作者

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? We can learn about a person from the books and movies that person likes.
阿拉阿丁

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发表于 2013-6-4 23:41:45 |只看该作者

llsss_1234

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement that people should buy things made by their own country, even if things of other countries may cost less.

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