题目如下,有评改的同学说我跑题了。
8.13
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In order to succeed, you should be more like others than be different from everyone else.
我第一段是这样的
I generally agree with the author's broad assertion that to succeed you need to be different from others, but the author unnecessary further the opinion that you need to be different from everybody else, since in some basic field we need to learn from ancestors first then create later.
crazyrobin 发表于 2013-8-14 17:07
你第一段的观点没有出来,什么叫learn from others?这根different不挂钩。
另外这个模板我昨天就见到 ...
多谢CR了!:hug:
我这个是直接套用了I的一个模板,应该是很久前考AW时另一个同学的模板。用在了T上。
哦,我明白了,最后一句应该写成it should be divided with the situation whether we should be more like others or different from everyone else.
这样就可以采取中立的态度两方面说了对吗?