Some people believe that television has had a positive influence on society. Others believe is has had a negative influence on society. Which do you agree with and why? Use details and examples to explain your opinion.
Some people believe that television has had a positive inf ...
very good.
几个小问题,
1) influence 重音错了,重音在前面, ˈinflo͝oəns
2)第一点中,你说的是 the fact is吗? 那个fact发音不是很清楚。
3)第二点有些牵强。你第一点说 TV program is more entertaining and less educational, 第二点说 keep us informed which reduce our communication, 这个点不是特别好。你可以直接说 reduce social activities和communication, 然后具体说怎么样,比如watch TV all days and become addicted to it, 然后说一下某个例子或者说下这种危害。
题目我猜是 throw things away
不够连贯,这次你的两点说得很好。
说几个问题,
1)第一点时候停顿了很久, problems是不能 summarize的,你可以 summarize concrete system或者 summarize main point, problem 可以用 solve之类的词。
2)第一点前面说的非常像一个单词一个单词的崩,没有口语说句子的感觉
3)第二点的 you can always remember inxxxx什么事情?这个单词我真心没听出声来。