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慕容小米UID: 3428108

Do you agree or disagree following statement? In today’s world, the ability to cooperate well with others is more important than before.

   When it comes to ability ,there are a variety of ability needed in today world.What I 'm eager to express is that the ability to cooperate well with others in today world is obviously more important than before.Certainly,I have my own reasons to support my opinion which
is as follows:
   In the first place ,at present,with faster and faster global economic integrating ,we need to cooperate with our partners in all place of walks to achieve our goals, only in this way can  we communicate  with each others to change our creative minds,thus,we can have the work finished efficiently ,In contrast to before'work model,workers just are required to work their own work out ,besides,there is not necessary to cooperate,they can finish the work by their own.Take our study for example,before,our teacher require us to finish homework only by our own,even our patents can not give a hand to us.What  different now is,however, that it is  of utmost importance for us to  complete our homework or activity with others,therefore,when we could't cooperate with others,then ,we couldn't achieve our work  very well.
  In the second place,there is no denying that it is the speedy social and economic development that contributes to more and more stress to individuals ,"only when you keep on going,then you can success".therefore,cooperating with others is conductive to communicating with others,then ,we can find a effective way to relieve our stress.As you can image ,if we just achieve our dream by our own,there is a likehood that we may go into despair.
  Last but not least,we need to treat the ability that cooperate with others seriously.taking into all the factors I mentionded above,I think
ability well with others is more important than before.

  

秋雨荆州UID: 2903781

加油

慕容小米UID: 3428108

秋雨荆州 发表于 2013-4-23 09:42
加油

谢谢

llsss_1234UID: 2998447

妹妹，你应该用高级模式上传一个WORD，这样人家好帮你改的。。

llsss_1234UID: 2998447

llsss_1234 发表于 2013-4-23 20:51
妹妹，你应该用高级模式上传一个WORD，这样人家好帮你改的。。

所以的word都放在你的一楼，别人来下。。

慕容小米UID: 3428108

llsss_1234 发表于 2013-4-23 20:51
妹妹，你应该用高级模式上传一个WORD，这样人家好帮你改的。。

哦，对唉，嘿嘿，知道了，谢谢

慕容小米UID: 3428108

llsss_1234 发表于 2013-4-23 20:51
妹妹，你应该用高级模式上传一个WORD，这样人家好帮你改的。。

哦，对唉，嘿嘿，知道了，谢谢

llsss_1234UID: 2998447

慕容小米 发表于 2013-5-6 01:29
哦，对唉，嘿嘿，知道了，谢谢

慢慢写吧，就算写个三四个小时，也把字数写齐了