【求教托福独立作文的人称问题】
前几天一位同学改我的独立写作,告诉我说托福独立写作说理部分最好都用第三人称。我有点拿不准,是这样吗?这个是5-28我的独立写作中的一部分:First, if we are working in the office, we will get a chance to communicate with our workmates about our own work. Sometimes, we can talk about difficulties in the work with each other and find solutions by discussing. 如果改成第三人称怎么感觉有点奇怪?请版主解答。谢谢!