T1 在例子中建议加入一些细节,比如你提到了leader交给你怎么样处理一些问题,就可以把遇到的困难说出来然后leader怎么样帮助的你也提到,这样就有了例子的细节,是否有细节在评分中是很重要的依据。比如说可以说我 For example,when I Just graduated from college I get a job to be a secretary in a firm,but I totally had no idea how to use standard words and format to write E-mail to my client.I felt so helpless.My leader Frank helped me a lot and taught me how to write a E-mail in standard way.He is actually a bit of a mentor for me.
还有主谓一致和时态上的小问题需要注意一下。
T2:语速可以稍快点,特别是前两句复述题目没必要占用太多时间。还有...invited a lot of friends 后面的从句应该用who引导,这样的小问题其实自己注意一下都能发现。内容上建议把礼物都有什么说一下增加细节,比如某某送了我一件漂亮的衣服,衣服是啥颜色。