我心飞翔6.13 AW作业 issue 30 argument 173

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issue 30

Teachers' salaries should be based on their students' academic performance.

Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.

argument 173

The following appeared in a letter to the editor of the Balmer Island Gazette.

The population on Balmer Island doubles during the summer months. During the summer, then, the town council of Balmer Island should decrease the maximum number of moped rentals allowed at each of the island's six moped and bicycle rental companies from 50 per day to 30 per day. This will significantly reduce the number of summertime accidents involving mopeds and pedestrians. The neighboring island of Torseau actually saw a 50 percent reduction in moped accidents last year when Torseau's town council enforced similar limits on moped rentals. To help reduce moped accidents, therefore, we should also enforce these limitations during the summer months.

Write a response in which you examine the stated and/or unstated assumptions of the argument. Be sure to explain how the argument depends on these assumptions and what the implications are for the argument if the assumptions prove unwarranted.

希望大家把issue 时间控制进1小时，argument 40分钟。

argument是篇低频，大家可以试试带读题，构思，40分钟能写成什么样。稍微练一下考试遇到argument低频也能相对从容

sddl 2013.6.14 22:00
rddl 2013.6.15 22:00

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yeungmarc o改zsxlylei 改 HOMIE 改yeungmarco
泠泠曲罢 kekele007
v_apor  Batigoal0611
天薇凉  ynayum
rakusin kashellou
当初的梦想  shimeng

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  compe  蓝雪舞 violetblood Vannyzhu 请假。
关于我自己。。我最近没什么时间写AW，这几篇AW我也都写过。。就水一下了。

下一次作业开始由 版主foamfly 为大家布置。

蓝雪舞UID: 3395566

作文请假，6.13-6.16.
因为作文写的比较烂。报了了作文班。所以。。。:lol

violetbloodUID: 3396659

作文请假，6.14-6.15
要去广州考托福，因为赶路加上看考场没时间写作文了，15号考完还得回珠海收拾宿舍办离校手续神马的，毕业了嘛:p

Batigoal0611UID: 3300324

写的不好。
求狠批

zsxlyleiUID: 3410008

argument 写了27分钟-。-感觉好多冗余词堆砌。。。彻底混乱了T T
argument 173 zsxlylei.doc (29.5 KB, 下载次数: 1)

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issue 30 zsxlylei.doc (29.5 KB, 下载次数: 4)

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v_aporUID: 3392877

issue 30--6.14--by v_apor.doc (28 KB, 下载次数: 2)

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~狠~
arg 173--6.14--by v_apor.doc (28.5 KB, 下载次数: 3)

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~拍~

kashellouUID: 3270179

申请缓交

HOMIEUID: 3302675

交上来啦

rakusinUID: 3418242

issue请假

yeungmarcoUID: 3366325

Argu 173 (13-jun) yeungmarco.docx (24.93 KB, 下载次数: 1)

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Issue 30 (13 june) yeungmarco.docx (21.77 KB, 下载次数: 0)

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  不會寫, 沒時間了...尼瑪




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argument 173 zsxlylei_Revised by yeungmarco.doc (28 KB, 下载次数: 1)

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issue 30 zsxlylei_Revised by yeungmarco.doc (31.5 KB, 下载次数: 3)

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当初的梦想UID: 3430779

写完了

VannyzhuUID: 3012410

啊请假请迟了~
我要脱离组织几天，准备周一的答辩还是各种毕业事宜。

shimeng0316UID: 3127261

一休~阿狗写不好了~

kekele007UID: 3363572

交文，argu迷茫了
Argu173 kele.docx (16.33 KB, 下载次数: 1)

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          Issue30 kele.docx (18.58 KB, 下载次数: 1)

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ynayumiUID: 3382325

虽然打卡~不过周末断网路TOT,请假到6.17