6.18 issue+argument

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issue 103

The best ideas arise from a passionate interest in commonplace things.

Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.

argument 49

The following is part of a memorandum from the president of Humana University.

"Last year the number of students who enrolled in online degree programs offered by nearby Omni University increased by 50 percent. During the same year, Omni showed a significant decrease from prior years in expenditures for dormitory and classroom space, most likely because online instruction takes place via the Internet. In contrast, over the past three years, enrollment at Humana University has failed to grow and the cost of maintaining buildings has increased. Thus, to increase enrollment and solve the problem of budget deficits at Humana University, we should initiate and actively promote online degree programs like those at Omni."

Write a response in which you examine the stated and/or unstated assumptions of the argument. Be sure to explain how the argument depends on these assumptions and what the implications are for the argument if the assumptions prove unwarranted.

小葬歌UID：3372619

这个题目在5.5上是就passionate写的
如果我着重写commonplace things算偏题吗

vngogherUID：3391684

请假，，在职伤不起，，不过我可以给大家改改~

windywinterUID：2919682

我觉得我今天得继续请假了，期末考试伤不起……

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小葬歌 发表于 2013-6-18 09:11
这个题目在5.5上是就passionate写的
如果我着重写commonplace things算偏题吗

具体思路是怎样的？？

如果是我的话可能会这样写：
承认有些想法来自对平凡事物的强烈兴趣
衣食住行等各方面：比如说衣服的设计，美食的发明等
但也有来自不平凡事物的
比如说登月之类的。

或者也可以这样写
承认想法来自强烈兴趣
但否认所有先发来自对平凡事物的强烈兴趣

还可以这样写
承认有些想法来自对平凡事物强烈兴趣
但还有些只是偶然。

感觉只要能自圆其说都不会离题，唯一要注意的一点可能就是全文要涉及到 best idea; passionate interest; commonplace things这三个点，不用每个都论证，但论证的时候一定要顾及到。

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vngogher 发表于 2013-6-18 15:40
请假，，在职伤不起，，不过我可以给大家改改~

对了~昨天的作文去贴上吧~~ 有人互改哦。

小葬歌UID：3372619

zsxlylei 发表于 2013-6-18 18:22
具体思路是怎样的？？

如果是我的话可能会这样写：

多谢解答
我是主要写虽然有很多想法来自commonplace things
但是有更多的发现都是来自不平凡的事物
其中稍微涉及到一点best idea的定义和passionate的作用

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交作业。。。

zsxlyleiUID：3410008

小葬歌 发表于 2013-6-18 22:03
多谢解答
我是主要写虽然有很多想法来自commonplace things
但是有更多的发现都是来自不平凡的事物

反驳的话只要确实是个反驳点就OK~ 但是同意部分要提到题中所有内容~~

c-strickUID：2627326

昨天回去太晚，宿舍断网，补请个假……这篇写完我自己找别人改好了

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c-strick 发表于 2013-6-19 09:15
昨天回去太晚，宿舍断网，补请个假……这篇写完我自己找别人改好了

额，不妨跟Zhaitb改~ 18号只有一篇0.0