嗨~翼~
又輪到我來評你的囉^^
7.12的部分
task1
"like to go to shopping,or movie..."
我不太清楚,不過你如果是想講"像是去shopping,看電影..."的話
應該是like+Ving
還有"just spend an afternoon in a cafe to talk to each other"
task2
我覺得這題答得很好,沒找到什麼問題
Task 2 非常好
Task 1 感觉很空,这本书是叫1948?听了描述还是没懂这书是什么内容。is it fiction or non-fiction? which country is the author from? you said sth about political and history in the book...what country does the author focus on? and in which time period?
你看,我听完描述还能问出这么多问题,可见book的内容并没有描述出来啊……
hi,听lz说话听出一种电影里人们说话的感觉,发音好清晰
7.13
task1:可以说author的名字这样又有detail 了,read 的发音再检查一下。最后的“I will learned a lot from”阔以改为I will learn a lot of the history...
task2:"his or hers own opinion"改为her。其他没有神马问题,加油儿!