整体感觉还是很流畅的哦~听起来很舒服,可能个别单词的发音有一点小问题。。但是不影响整体
TASK1
有几个单词没有听懂。。I like to suggest my friend always keep interest of ....
下面一句话没有听懂。。可能是我听力不好
还有一点。。if people want to be secceed 应该改为successful
其他的都很不错,并且语言组织的感觉很地道。。不生硬
TASK2
这个没有什么问题,都听懂了,然后也很流畅,就是楼主最好声音再大一点哦
下一句是,People are usually full of enthusiasm when they find a new job, but the passion will be disappear one day.
Full of和enthusiasm的发音不太对,所以导致句意理解带来困难。。不好意思啦。。。
0824
T1:语速有点点慢了,不过段子很流利呢,只有一个重复和停顿。有点小疑问,recently have a race 要换成had 吗?后面的时态都是过去式~~
T2: 时态不一致 i could ask...; they can recommend me some places to **,没听清是什么; ... i want(wanted) to...
LZ实在模拟考试吗?总体来说很不错,语速和音调都很好,几乎没有重复和停顿,就是时态方面需要保持一致。
一起加油~~
8.25
very nice to meet you!
task1
语速偏慢了,建议加快一点速度。内容很不错,details and your personal experiences.WELL, 最后没有说完,这有一些遗憾,不过对speaking来说应该影响不大。然后里面的一个文艺的描述,white line was becoming colorful by defferent dyes,感觉表达得有一点奇怪,能不能这么说啊?chingish?
或者换一种说法,the garments people wore are colorful and were another scene for the racing.
and so on.....
task2
时态错误,makes换为made.这段的内容有一点空,why it cultivates your responsibility, or are you already responsible? 这里没有你的part-time jobs和你的责任感的联系和逻辑关联。建议再细化你的说法。然后一些personal events,for example, why you are intern in a press, you have to report faithful to the facts. You have to arrive at the accident spot immediately. etc.
用词,句式什么的都挺好的。
加油!
仰慕好久了 语音语调啥的太棒了 楼主是一遍说的么
今天终于一组啦
T1 10s左右 I'm a ? suppose myself?
T2 is that bring me different angle angle 读音要注意 楼主说成angel了 我查了一下 好像没有bring different angle的说法 应该是 不同的想法啦perspective or idea吧~~