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  The influence of modern-day technology on children’s creativity can never be exaggerated than ever. Some people fully believe that technology have definitely weakened the creativity of children, meanwhile, dissenters do think that high technologies have positive influence for improving the child’s creativity. From my own perspective, the former one is apparently more favorable.
It is widely acknowledged that child creativity can be acquired in two ways: learning rudimentary principles of a subject which they are interested in from a patient and responsible teacher or incessantly coming up with new solutions and inspirations to problems through large number of practice. In the past children used to have to interact with their parents or teacher in order to acquire more knowledge they were fond of.  In this way, the adults can urge children to thinking by themselves which can really cultivate child’s creativity. Not only this, they had to learn the efficient method in order to cope with tough situation without any help from technology. Thus, children in the past seem to be more compatible with the conditions for being creative.
As the modern society develops, high-tech equipments such as TV and computer have become indispensable part of children’s life, and totally change their every day lifestyles. The only thing children want to interact with have became the computer and video game instead of their parents or friends. It is quite common these days to found children playing video games for only adults designed by engineers. Although some children might be curious about how the games are working or produced, and raise some questions to their teachers, they cannot learn more about such things without the aid of professionals. In the contrary, the majority of children are merely focus on the amazing pictures, fascinating plots and intense atmosphere of  games rather other the fundamental of productions or how the designer came up with the idea in the first place.
However, this is not the whole picture. There has news of many intelligent children who has made remarkable achievements or even created virus that have confused the adult experts. Nevertheless, it is just negligible phenomenon compared with that of children who have become less creative because of contemporary technological development.
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没人理啊 :L

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发表于 2013-7-22 18:24:46 |只看该作者
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