task1,2不错 有理有据
task3内容第一部分:at the 3rd hour students stop learning 读音:seminar shorten woman
task4 people can tell what they had for dinner last night, effect是名词不能做动词 affect
读音panther
task 5 a problem with office visit? 可以在前面加上为什么教授说星期五不好的原因
task6 调理很清楚,不错!
楼主,加油!
8.10 LZ整体说的挺好的,能够连续一直说,这就是我的目标了
T1: 是不是直接说my favorite two singers are blablabla更好点儿
their music have(has)
T2:最后说到时间花在看书上貌似放在letters很费时间之后更好,毕竟email并不会cost a lot of time
8.12
task1
好像有一点跑题。题目的强调是differences between two cities,但是你的争端话是围绕你的首句I'd like to describe two cities展开的,对relationship between hanzhou and shanghai的描述不是很清楚。发音和用词都good。
task2
8.12的task2好像不是你的录音的题目诶。。。anyway,我不知道楼主回答的是哪个题目,但我就凭听力做一下评价吧。第一句there are not much situations有一点奇怪,建议换做there is little need for primary stu. to use computer。then,楼主吸引用的是absolve,有点奇怪,应该是absorb?be absorbed in doing sth.。最后一个,bad for their bones,bones的发音不对,听上去像bound。
8-14
整体感觉:有条理、内容丰富、流利、清晰、语法错误少!(这都是我羡慕的……赞!)
T1:
this position is why not give him the chance?
两个理由调理清晰,也相应有理由支持~不错!内容充实
T2:
chirp鸟叫? 这个发音貌似有错
feel-->felt
temporary escape from the academic workload!! 很赞的表达~