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The lecture stands on the other side of the reading passage that American wood companies are willing to receive ecocertification.

First of all, the reading passage claims that American consumers will not be convinced by the advertising anymore. However, in the lecuture, the professor explains that American consumers do not treat every advertisement as the same. They have much more confidence on the advertisement made by independent certification agencies than which made by companies for their own products.

In addition, reading passage argues that consumers must be unpleasant to give more money for the same products. In contrast, the lecture points out that American consumers do choose factors other than price if there is only small difference on price.

Last but not least, the reading passage says that although it does attract more foreign consumers if they spends money on certification, at the same time, foreign companies will control the American markets. However, the lecture arues that paying certification is not for foreign consumers, but the foreign competition. If national wood companies don't offer equal certification products, without a doubt, American wood markets will be taken by foreign companies.

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优异至上 发表于 2013-8-17 22:54
The lecture stands on the other side of the reading passage that American wood companies are willing ...

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抱歉晚了点哈~

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byj1991 发表于 2013-8-18 13:59
抱歉晚了点哈~

没事 谢谢亲亲

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抱歉 唉 今天出去上课了 错过了交作业的时间 有没有哪位好心的亲亲能帮我改一改http://pan.baidu.com/share/link? ... 2&uk=2066545636
1.交通对生活的好处
2.因为交通我们有了口福
3.科技太过发达对我们的不利影响

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优异至上 发表于 2013-8-19 21:59
抱歉 唉 今天出去上课了 错过了交作业的时间 有没有哪位好心的亲亲能帮我改一改http://pan.baidu.com/share ...

这是写作？略跪...妹纸写作的文件很小，可以直接传附件...你真的这么电脑小白么。听力那个传网盘...

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很不错的，手重，不周之处见谅。欢迎后续反馈

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wilsonw 发表于 2013-8-19 22:49
很不错的，手重，不周之处见谅。欢迎后续反馈

亲亲真的好热心 爱死你了
favoree是受益者的意思 我用有道查的
flyover那个例子是有点夸张啦 但是至少坐公交是缩短了一半时间的
真心的谢谢亲亲 唉 不愧是老乡啊 真的好用心的帮我批改
唉 我最致命的缺点都被你点出来了 就是有时写作文无关废话太多 整的中心论据都没有时间详细的描述 这个我只能慢慢改了
真的谢谢亲亲 认识你那么优秀的老乡 是我的骄傲啊！！

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wilsonw 发表于 2013-8-19 22:10
这是写作？略跪...妹纸写作的文件很小，可以直接传附件...你真的这么电脑小白么。听力那个传网盘...

是滴是滴 以后记住了 呵呵

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优异至上 发表于 2013-8-19 23:28
亲亲真的好热心 爱死你了
favoree是受益者的意思 我用有道查的
flyover那个例子是有点夸张啦 但是至少坐 ...

.....这个比你大了N届了，多学这么多年稍微笨点也能“优秀”了。高中玩T的我们学校那会一个级不是国际班的也就那么2、3人，当时觉得完全不是一个档次的唉！你这个是比我厉害太多了。

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wilsonw 发表于 2013-8-20 09:25
.....这个比你大了N届了，多学这么多年稍微笨点也能“优秀”了。高中玩T的我们学校那会一个级不是国际班的 ...

呵呵 我不想说 我这学期刚刚转入国际部。。。