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[优秀习作] issue160, 这几天有点懒,大家看看! [复制链接]

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发表于 2004-1-28 18:57:18 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览
160 The most essential quality of an effective leader is the ability to remain consistently committed to particular principles and objectives. Any leader who is quickly and easily influenced by shifts in popular opinion will accomplish little."

When we deal with the increasingly complex real-world situations, sometimes we must make a final decision to let the things go on. Actually, the leaders just serve this end. Without a leader, it is very much likely that we may miss the best time in ceaselessly disputing over whether we should take a certain action.  Nevertheless, Leaders must be conscribed within the sphere of democracy or the personal liberty will be spoiled, while the ability to remain consistently committed to particular principles and objectives, without which large amount of time and resources will be dissipated without any actual gain, should also be emphasized.

Since our world seems to us much more complex than ever before, and also since personal liberty has been significantly enhanced, people always have reasons and rights to question some plans, ideas and even basic principles firmly stuck to before. Although the freedom of speech is quite necessary, or any wrong doings would probably be covered, prompt judgment should be made to catch up with the pace. When a leader forms a determination, he is surely burdened with great responsibility. And since then, he will inevitably face the arising suspicion and even castigation. Because everyone has his own opinion and more importantly some oppositions may in the end turn out to be true, the leader shouldn't reject or even resent these remarks. But in reality, there emerge too many advices, assent or dissent, whereas leaders are supposed to deal with it with enough resolution, otherwise the best time for taking measures will be lost. For one example, during the famous Cuba Missile Crisis, president Kennedy quickly required that Cuba must be disarmed of the medium range ballistic missiles from Soviet Union, or that the US Army without question would attack it. Certainly, many objections arose during the process of this decision that seems to be a most effective one making US free from threatening.  

If a leader always shifts with the outside remark, he is obviously not able to concentrate on his plan whether it is right or not. So he, of course, cannot achieve anything without overcoming this propensity. As is clear, when a man deviates from his half-done job to go on with another that is urged by other people, he will undoubtedly lose much time and energy. If we consider this to be a natural change aiming at gaining a better result, things will not be the same when such change happens often. That is, he will always fails even if his original plan is correct.

On the other hand, the hesitation, which is always considered to be the result of the leader's discreet character, may mostly originate from cowardice, which could not possibly be denied. The burdens are too heavy, the undesirable result is sometimes too embarrassing, so the leader must be equipped with the weapons of courage and resolution.  In this way, the chances of success will be greatly increased.

As a result, the leader must have a brave heart like William Wallace to confront the results of his decision whether good or not, but to make thing complete, great attention should also be paid to the voice from others. Correctness and courage are both vital to the final result!
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发表于 2004-1-29 11:09:22 |只看该作者
第一段开头两个问句是有点莫名其妙,我去掉了:)
第一段我说的是:人们总是要对一些事情做出最终决定,老是争论会丧失最佳战机,但又指出听取别人的意见也是需要的。

第二段讲的是坚守自己的原则,迅速做出决定的必要性,举了古巴导弹危机做例子,又顺带说了一下,leader也要结合别人的意见做出自己的判断。

第三段是说犹豫不定,经常改变主张的leader不会成功。
第四段是说过分听信他人的意见,其实是一种懦弱的行为,所以lleader要有果断和勇气。
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发表于 2004-1-29 18:06:41 |只看该作者
1,        When we deal with the increasingly complex real-world situations, sometimes we must make a final decision to let the things go on.“dealing with the increasingly complex real-world situations, sometimes we ……..” WAILS,写到一定程度以后有的时候是注意一下句式,用词这些小地方的时候了。虽然这样改句子不见得好什么,不过个人认为这是一个参考思路。第一段的表达让有点晕了,意思可以理解,不过感觉转过来转过去的。
2,        读了2 段,感觉表达读起来很不舒服。还没有看完,明天再看吧,可是就看结构,好象不是很平衡吧。:)不过还没有读完,可能意见不太对。
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