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[作文] 【独立写作】阿阿阿端作业贴 [复制链接]

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发表于 2013-9-23 22:56:32 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览
本帖最后由 阿阿阿端 于 2013-10-3 07:40 编辑

作业贴,自我监督!!

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Some people might cast doubt on whether younger school children are supposed to absorb a variety of subjects, which not only include basic and social sciences like math and language but also art and music. However, from my perspective, no matter in a long-term run or short-time period, learning art and music have more positive effects on children than its negative side. The following reasons states what I advocate.

On one hand, in terms of the significance in a short-time period, art and music can bring practical benefits to younger children even though they are not directly related to numeracy, scientific know-how or literacy. For instance, playing musical instruments can train students’ eye-hand coordination, which are needed when children are not fully developed. Also, pottery or porcelain making can enhance the cooperation between the left brain and the right brain, thereby enabling the kids to come up with more creative solutions to problems. Moreover, singing in front of the audience provides an opportunity for kid to improve their ability self-expression, which many children lack.

On the other hand, in a long-term run, taking art and music courses can help mold children’s character. Anyone who embarked on learning art or music, or both, and finally exceled in them would admit that they have experienced a hard time making no progress or being tired of what they learned. For example a violin learner may not be able to play a complete and beautiful song in the first or second year of learning. Then the children overcame them with their tenacity, therefore they succeeded. Consequently, kids in five or ten developed a character of perseverance, which contributes to their future live-i.e. whenever they are in difficulties they will try to tackle them instead of giving up to them. Besides, as we grow up, there are more and more pressure coming from study and daily life, art and music are good tools to release the anxiety and depression. Taking myself for an example, I have learned to play the piano when I was eight. When I entered high school, I found myself often disturbed by the heavy burden of homework or handling the relationship with people around. Every time I turned to my piano to give myself a mind of peace indulged in the beautiful melody and the anxiety disappeared.

In conclusion, I would not agree more to the importance of art and music for younger school children from five to ten. Not only will they benefit from the art and music themselves, but also the further influence when shape the kids to better individuals.

1 从短期对孩子的影响
2 长期对品格的影响以及作为日后的一种解压方式

手生没思路,要哭了。。。还借用了几句背过的段子T T求大神们指导

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igrowing 发表于 2013-9-24 16:38
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谢谢~怎么找你的作文?是在你的帖子里吗?我第一交作业还不是很清楚流程。。。

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阿阿阿端 发表于 2013-9-24 19:07
谢谢~怎么找你的作文?是在你的帖子里吗?我第一交作业还不是很清楚流程。。。

不用改啦,我没写,哈哈

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annie1991713 发表于 2013-9-25 11:25
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谢谢修改~~

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wellness 发表于 2013-9-25 08:26
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十分感谢~~~我得努力练习啦!

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该好啦,请查收,盼回复讨论啊

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昨天生病,修改迟了。 9.25 0925 阿阿阿端 revised by annie.docx (19.32 KB, 下载次数: 1)

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a121813602 发表于 2013-9-26 20:30
该好啦,请查收,盼回复讨论啊

前两天出去比赛了没及时回复,不好意思嘿嘿!谢谢修改~~今天继续练起来~~

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annie1991713 发表于 2013-9-27 13:59
昨天生病,修改迟了。 9.25

好好休息哦,谢谢啦~

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