[口语小组]gyygtt作业贴（10.27）

gyygttUID: 3040190

作业贴加油！
10.12 task 1-6: http://pan.baidu.com/s/1ceKc5
10.11 task1-6: http://pan.baidu.com/s/1yzqgo
10.7 task 1-6: http://pan.baidu.com/s/1FtXck
10.6 task 1-6: http://pan.baidu.com/s/1uvoqD
10.1 task 1-2: http://pan.baidu.com/s/1d0aiz

CashvsUID: 3459680

T1: 应该是when I “was” fifteen  I really want to XXX contest 这边感觉语速突然加快听不清楚在讲什么 中间讲错的地方要再练得顺一点哦 内容结构上还算完整 若把讲错的部分再修正一下大致上就没问题了

T2: 第二题没有例子作辅助是一个致命的错误 而且中间部分还停顿了几秒 最好也可以透过练习做适当的修正 建议LZ这题要重新练习，想一个例子来论证你的说法吧
最后 T1和T2都是45秒哦 LZ都只讲了30多秒而已 这也是个很大的扣分点

gyygttUID: 3040190

Cashvs 发表于 2013-10-2 16:01
T1: 应该是when I “was” fifteen  I really want to XXX contest 这边感觉语速突然加快听不清楚在讲什么  ...

谢谢啦~你好仔细， 我前两天没时间弄。。囧。

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gyygtt 发表于 2013-10-3 20:44
谢谢啦~你好仔细， 我前两天没时间弄。。囧。

哈哈 没关系 一起加油吧~

lhm77499UID: 3420601

gyygtt 发表于 2013-10-3 20:44
谢谢啦~你好仔细， 我前两天没时间弄。。囧。

hello，你的网盘里面没有10月6号的录音啊？！

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lhm77499 发表于 2013-10-7 09:40
hello，你的网盘里面没有10月6号的录音啊？！

啊~。。怎么可能 我再看看。

gyygttUID: 3040190

lhm77499 发表于 2013-10-7 09:40
hello，你的网盘里面没有10月6号的录音啊？！

这下有了。 可能给的地址不对。

谢谢啦~！

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gyygtt 发表于 2013-10-7 10:31
这下有了。 可能给的地址不对。

谢谢啦~！

10.6
Your pronunciation is good!
t1 you talked abot Gas's experience, but how you summarize from his changing careers that you should not give up and complain, I suggest that you give some statemnet about this aspect.
t2 make a lot of people...well, you should say make friends...Your point has been very good, though.  
t3 your first reason have not been fully elaboraed. the time of giving a speech should also included in your point.
t4cultural lag, the concept refers to time period needed for people to acccept a new technology.  This means, you should have emphasize the process of accepting it.  But you have allocated too little time for it.
t5the point is not why it benefits to you but to the man in the listening.
t6weathering,two ways of how it happens.  You have uttered it cautiously, but you have presented most of the details in the listening.

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lhm77499 发表于 2013-10-7 11:20
10.6
Your pronunciation is good!
t1 you talked abot Gas's experience, but how you summarize from ...

牛~~
谢谢你给这么多中肯的意见~！~继续加油！

jsc0218UID: 3151269

10.07
T1
开头的语调有点像在绕口令啊。

T3
and also说了好多遍

T4
概念和例子的关系没有阐明啊。根据robin的帖子，说要此题高分，需要解释这个关系。

T5
支持的第一个理由停留在理论上，一直都说convenient，我觉得可以像这样说，比如不用做公车去学校啦，可以任何时候都做research什么的。

T6
没有描述支持的例子，只讲了理论。

其他都没啥问题啊。不过感觉LZ语速有点偏快。最后祝考试顺利。

mimimomo666UID: 3476142

楼主你的10/08还没有传还是我没找到？木有发现有帖子？

gyygttUID: 3040190

jsc0218 发表于 2013-10-8 09:10
10.07
T1
开头的语调有点像在绕口令啊。

oh
~好多毛病。囧。 赶紧改过来~

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jsc0218 发表于 2013-10-8 09:10
10.07
T1
开头的语调有点像在绕口令啊。

额。我是不是没有改你的口语作业。。。。。前段时间我很混乱~

lhm77499UID: 3420601

10.11
good at pronunciation!GOOD!
t1activities and relationship could act as unexpectations.  I think you could rearrange your presentation as you  have planned to do your homework.
t2hang out to the museum, I think this is not serious, maybe you could say they have to visit museums to study.
t3article[ar'ti:kl]  there seems to be in somewhat chaos near the end of your response.
t4good.
t5good, I think you could add details like emial the professor is not efficient way to solve her problem
t6the rhythm of your speaking is not steafy...still the cough is disruptive....your content has included main details in the lecture.

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lhm77499 发表于 2013-10-11 23:50
10.11
good at pronunciation!GOOD!
t1activities and relationship could act as unexpectations.  I th ...

谢谢啦~！~好详细。~我都不怎么会给人做评价~。囧