11G作文互改题目贴

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第一次：10.15日
issue89
Claim: Many problems of modern society cannot be solved by laws and the legal system.       
Reason: Laws cannot change what is in people\'s hearts or minds.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.

argument132
The following appeared in a letter to the school board in the town of Centerville.       

All students should be required to take the driver\'s education course at Centerville High School. In the past two years, several accidents in and around Centerville have involved teenage drivers. Since a number of parents in Centerville have complained that they are too busy to teach their teenagers to drive, some other instruction is necessary to ensure that these teenagers are safe drivers. Although there are two driving schools in Centerville, parents on a tight budget cannot afford to pay for driving instruction. Therefore an effective and mandatory program sponsored by the high school is the only solution to this serious problem.       

Write a response in which you examine the stated and/or unstated assumptions of the argument. Be sure to explain how the argument depends on these assumptions and what the implications are for the argument if the assumptions prove unwarranted.


10.17日晚九点前上传，由于楼主电脑捉急了，明天再定分组。

大家辛苦啦~加油！

林子秋枫UID: 3215307

说好的九点上传吧，大家都不见动静，我先来吧。顺便跟大家打个招呼，我是北航 大四毕业生，目前gap year 中，大家就称呼我为林子吧。望多指教。

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林子秋枫 发表于 2013-10-17 21:05
说好的九点上传吧，大家都不见动静，我先来吧。顺便跟大家打个招呼，我是北航 大四毕业生，目前gap year 中 ...

ok辛苦
我明晚上传 sorry这两天电脑崩溃了没有写

candy_shmilyUID: 3449020

我的习作 求大神帮看看吧 感谢！！！

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candy_shmily 发表于 2013-10-18 21:17
我的习作 求大神帮看看吧 感谢！！！

难道就只有咱两互改啦？怎么运行啊

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林子秋枫 发表于 2013-10-18 23:34
难道就只有咱两互改啦？怎么运行啊

第一次就只有这样了呗 表示很无语诶

potchUID: 3478779

不太懂怎么玩，但是想加入
貌似根toefl的小组不一样
我11.30考试，大四了，着急………………

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我也写了一个issue，楼上帮我改下吧：）

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potch 发表于 2013-10-22 05:59
不太懂怎么玩，但是想加入
貌似根toefl的小组不一样
我11.30考试，大四了，着急………………

写好没有？
快发上来：）

potchUID: 3478779

hcjdance 发表于 2013-10-22 20:58
写好没有？
快发上来：）

好！我在改，估计明天早晨才能发上来，因为要断网…………

绿筱清涟UID: 3476200

也想加入可以不？水平很烂但时间很充裕....